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Old 07-29-2007, 09:52 PM
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Looks alright. The house is a bit small and weird, the detail is not bad at all. Cliffing is good from what I can see, and the dirt to grass style is good. You should connect some of the trees up north (the second batch with the third batch going left to right).

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Old 07-29-2007, 10:13 PM
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Hmm.. I like it.

I like the path it's pretty bulky but it goes quite nicely and you've detailed it pretty well. The house looks like an attempt at some japanese style thing which i don't realy like. other than that I like it. I really like the sandy bit where you've detailed the grass and sand and the path tiles together like that.
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Old 07-29-2007, 10:14 PM
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Old 07-29-2007, 10:15 PM
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where do u see a japanese thing in that house? i dont got rice shingels
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Old 07-29-2007, 11:36 PM
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where do u see a japanese thing in that house? i dont got rice shingels
I mean the style of the house is kinda japanese.. big at the bottom and on each level getting smaller. It's no big deal.. its a decent level
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Old 07-30-2007, 02:54 AM
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Old 07-30-2007, 03:49 AM
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Old 07-30-2007, 04:40 AM
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where do u see a japanese thing in that house? i dont got rice shingels
The stacking effect makes it look Japanese sort of.
I like the level, but not the house.
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I guess its alright. The house is kind of ugly. Detail is a bit too plane. And i guess that stone path style is alright but overused. Cliffing is nice but whats that **** above those 2 rocks at the bottom right of the level.
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It's nice, I like it. Just work on the house.
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I really like it Barth, especially the dirt area. The only issue I have with the level is the fact it seems a little crowded, maybe over detailed. Maybe that's just because I'm a Classic boy
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I really like it, decent classic level.
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Old 07-31-2007, 05:43 PM
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Seems balanced out and pretty neat 8/10. The npc sitting by the pot reminded me of Link to The Past with the bottle salesman, good times
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