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Old 06-17-2007, 09:13 PM
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New level

I was kinda bored,and decided to make a level, I have not leveled for a while
C&C please.
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Old 06-17-2007, 11:00 PM
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Pretty cool. I like the walls, but I sort of dislike the floor designs. Especially the random brown walkway tiles. They seem to make the floor a little overdone. Fairly creative and pretty. 7/10
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Old 06-18-2007, 01:18 AM
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you just put in alot of random tiles, doesnt look good at all.
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Old 06-18-2007, 01:21 AM
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you just put in alot of random tiles, doesnt look good at all.
I agree here. The walls are a bit random and not attractive. Floor is nasty too. Improve on which tiles you actually use.
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Old 06-18-2007, 01:25 AM
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Dunno if im right in saying this, but doesnt that look an awful lot like the Ranger Skill house on Zodaic but edited?
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Old 06-18-2007, 12:02 PM
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Dunno if im right in saying this, but doesnt that look an awful lot like the Ranger Skill house on Zodaic but edited?
I never played Zodiac =O


Thanks for all the crit, I will try to improve
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Old 06-18-2007, 12:55 PM
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I hate that level style, but you seem to be quite skilled.
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Old 06-18-2007, 05:46 PM
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I hate that level style, but you seem to be quite skilled.
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Old 06-18-2007, 06:01 PM
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Dunno if im right in saying this, but doesnt that look an awful lot like the Ranger Skill house on Zodaic but edited?


Lol it is he's like stolen Zodiacs level and made the carrpet different and made it a lil bigger..
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Old 06-18-2007, 06:38 PM
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Lol it is he's like stolen Zodiacs level and made the carrpet different and made it a lil bigger..
Wow, never saw that, O_o
Like I said I never played Zodiac..
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Old 06-18-2007, 06:39 PM
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Wow, never saw that, O_o
Like I said I never played Zodiac..
Lol.... Sure. Nice excuss though
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Old 06-18-2007, 07:06 PM
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Lol it is he's like stolen Zodiacs level and made the carrpet different and made it a lil bigger..
Totally busted.
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Old 06-18-2007, 07:07 PM
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Old 06-18-2007, 08:49 PM
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wow, wtf is wron g with you , I never played zosiac, how can I be totaly busted if I never saw that level before, **** and have some common sence
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Old 06-18-2007, 08:55 PM
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wow, wtf is wron g with you , I never played zosiac, how can I be totaly busted if I never saw that level before, **** and have some common sence
Lies.?.
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Old 06-18-2007, 09:36 PM
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You know, theres not an endless pool of creativity, and that level has one of the basic structures out there, so I doubt he ripped it. Plus the fact that no one would rip Zodiac levels because they are just plain ugly.
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Old 06-18-2007, 09:54 PM
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Usually I'd agree with Crow, but I remember partying a lot with zephirot on Zodiac so I know he is lying about playing it.
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Old 06-18-2007, 11:05 PM
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I don't even know you Grey O_o
GreyBakami. Whether you remember me or not I still have you on my buddylist from partying with you in the orc caves. I wouldn't forget your account and head. It was pre-reset but Zodiac's levels haven't changed dramatically. Unless of course somebody else was playing Zodiac on your account.

If you are going to steal level designs then Zodiac is probably the worst place to have stolen them from.
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Old 06-18-2007, 11:37 PM
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GreyBakami. Whether you remember me or not I still have you on my buddylist from partying with you in the orc caves. I wouldn't forget your account and head. It was pre-reset but Zodiac's levels haven't changed dramatically. Unless of course somebody else was playing Zodiac on your account.

If you are going to steal level designs then Zodiac is probably the worst place to have stolen them from.
You are not my buddy, you are not on my buddylist, no one used my account because I'm playing UN, I never played zodiac, I never ripped their level.
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Old 06-19-2007, 12:18 AM
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or maybe zodiac stole from him... DUN DUN DOO DOO DUN DUN DOO O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O_O
lol the levels are pretty bad anyways.
You could im prove on the floor, earlier I was going to say do something similar to Zodiac's level but yeah.. lol
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Old 06-19-2007, 12:27 AM
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You are not my buddy, you are not on my buddylist, no one used my account because I'm playing UN, I never played zodiac, I never ripped their level.
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Wow somebody has a terrible attitude problem. If I wanted to I could go on Zodiac and get your online time there and post it, but why would I bother really to go out of my way to prove somebody like you wrong?

Even if the level design is stolen:
The tiling is pretty terrible, don't randomly place tiles. The stair tile for the floor for example and the brown shouldn't be used against the red like that, does not look nice at all.

If you're going to use poles on the wall in that way symmetry is your friend. The back wall looks odd with the one larger post then smaller one after another, also the door looks odd with one pole rather than two next to it.
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Old 06-19-2007, 02:27 AM
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Wow somebody has a terrible attitude problem. If I wanted to I could go on Zodiac and get your online time there and post it, but why would I bother really to go out of my way to prove somebody like you wrong?

Even if the level design is stolen:
The tiling is pretty terrible, don't randomly place tiles. The stair tile for the floor for example and the brown shouldn't be used against the red like that, does not look nice at all.

If you're going to use poles on the wall in that way symmetry is your friend. The back wall looks odd with the one larger post then smaller one after another, also the door looks odd with one pole rather than two next to it.
Do it.
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Old 06-19-2007, 04:03 AM
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Do it.
Very well, if I must.

[removed] (Tue Jun 19 02:59:52 2007):
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That's approximately 13961 minutes or..

232.6 hours.

Never been on it indeed. I'd disagree, 232 times.

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Old 06-19-2007, 10:48 AM
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It's a bad level. I don't like the floor, nor the walls.

I was actually considering sticking up for you until the way you spoke to Grey :P
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Very well, if I must.

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That's approximately 13961 minutes or..

232.6 hours.

Never been on it indeed. I'd disagree, 232 times.
You made it up, stop dreaming dude, I have never stoled it.
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Old 06-19-2007, 01:32 PM
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Stolen or not, zeph go ahead and still improve on the level and post it. I'll still help you out.
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Yeah because I have a lot of reason to lie about something that is practically in no way related to me about somebody that I've had only a few interactions with.

I will still crit your tiling also despite the fact you've been incredibly rude.
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Yeah because I have a lot of reason to lie about something that is practically in no way related to me about somebody that I've had only a few interactions with.

I will still crit your tiling also despite the fact you've been incredibly rude.
How can I not be rude against someone who just pop up and accuse me of stealing the design of a level I never saw before, dude , seriously.

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How about getting his Class on Zodiac if you can.. If he is a Ranger he will DEFINETLY know about that level =]

And ill get his online time too... and post it

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Ok, do it.
Same as Grey said.. Means you havent log on since he got your online time =]
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Both of the levels arnt that amazing anyways.
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Same as Grey said.. Means you havent log on since he got your online time =]
I was on era yesterday.
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Both of the levels arnt that amazing anyways.
I know but i hate people that steal levels/Server's

For all i know he could have Zodiac's whole server on his desktop
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Yea you were on ERA yesterday so what?
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Feel free to make another level that is not so similar to another level online and post for crits. This one is causing way too much arguing.
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