Indoor Level

Grappler · #1 09-27-2005, 04:00 AM

Here's a level I made as an entrance to a guildhouse. Please rate/criticize it, and help me to make it better. Thanks.

http://img399.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ldhouse6kr.png

Mykel · #2 09-27-2005, 08:34 AM

Pretty neat. I like the creativity. 7/10

Torankusu_2002 · #3 09-27-2005, 08:50 AM

looks like it's based off of the old zormite castle for 2k1. Don't think you were around then, but, it had doors off to the side like that in that perspective, except in the center it didn't have the waterfall, it had a new level.

Crono · #4 09-27-2005, 05:40 PM

It's ok...

Drastic Vendetta · #5 09-27-2005, 07:52 PM

I'll have to agree with Mykel. That's better than 'ok'. Good work.

Infernix · #6 09-27-2005, 09:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gerami

It's ok...

I 2nd that

Hitmanjack · #7 09-27-2005, 10:18 PM

I generally like it. Not much to complain about. More of what I would say a "unrisky" level. Been done before, looked good them looks good now.

petro1212 · #8 09-28-2005, 12:49 AM

Mmmm its ok it could use some touching up.

Here's a screenshot from a level I did ages ago on Rudora might be a slight tip for detailing. Try to use as little of "flood" fill floor detailing as possible. Only do this if you got a realy nice patern and your going to edit it later on. Floorfill floors look a bit cheap.

URL: http://www.graalonline.com/community...ra-skipfun.png

Grappler · #9 10-04-2005, 02:59 AM

I made 2 more indoor levels, and 1 more outdoor level.

I also updated the 1st level!

http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?i...utside33pq.png
http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=inside21mq.png
http://img223.imageshack.us/my.php?image=inside10pp.png

Update: Added some dirt to the paths.
http://img96.imageshack.us/my.php?im...ldhouse7xl.png

Luda · #10 10-04-2005, 04:04 AM

meh i like the outside but the inside for your house(s)
have too many windows O-o

Grappler · #11 11-15-2005, 04:48 AM

Here's another level I made a few days ago. Comments are welcome.

Birdbird_0 · #12 11-15-2005, 11:56 AM

I like them, they're not cluttered and have a good layout to them.

Codein · #13 11-15-2005, 12:44 PM

Aye, I like them too

Keep up the good work.

haunter · #14 11-15-2005, 04:33 PM

Elk, make you own thread. Next time I'm not going to split the thread... Next time I'm going to delete your post.

Elk · #15 11-15-2005, 04:42 PM

ok im sorry but if theres a thread where to post lvls, why do i have to make another thread =/?

haunter · #16 11-15-2005, 04:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Elk

ok im sorry but if theres a thread where to post lvls, why do i have to make another thread =/?

Because that's the whole point of this section. We've tried the one thread thing before. It was stupid. Don't argue, just do it.

Darlene159 · #17 11-15-2005, 04:53 PM

I like your level style, very nice

Malinko · #18 11-15-2005, 06:55 PM

Nice levels.

I like the outside level the best.

Aknts · #19 11-15-2005, 07:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Birdbird_0

I like them, they're not cluttered and have a good layout to them.

Oh wow.. teh birdbird.

Malinko · #20 11-15-2005, 07:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aknts

Oh wow.. teh birdbird.

Run.

Fast.

WanDaMan · #21 11-15-2005, 08:55 PM

Nice levels

CidNight1142 · #22 11-15-2005, 08:56 PM

oh man birdbird...i recently came back to graal after a 2 year...almost permanent (I almost made it!) retirement. I used to be a level maker back then and I remember birdbird was one of the best and was the inspiration for my inside level work. Account used to be Edge1142, I'm sure noone remembers, I was a PW player, never dabbled much in P2P until now. Sorry, just had some serious nostalgia.

Grappler · #23 11-19-2005, 05:21 AM

I made a level just now. I was trying new things and I like the way this one turned out.

Also, in the second image, there are tiles which I've never seen used before. I tried to do something with them, and it looks like they're railroad tracks, or a bridge or something. Anybody know about these?

haunter · #24 11-19-2005, 06:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grappler

I made a level just now. I was trying new things and I like the way this one turned out.

Also, in the second image, there are tiles which I've never seen used before. I tried to do something with them, and it looks like they're railroad tracks, or a bridge or something. Anybody know about these?

It's a rope bridge for going over water... Don't bother using them, they're dumb. A scripted bridge would look much nicer, and work better.

MysticX2X · #25 11-19-2005, 06:57 PM

levels are kinda plain but there pretty good, plains good, i really dont like messy inside levels. Good job.

excaliber7388 · #26 11-19-2005, 07:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Grappler

I made a level just now. I was trying new things and I like the way this one turned out.

Also, in the second image, there are tiles which I've never seen used before. I tried to do something with them, and it looks like they're railroad tracks, or a bridge or something. Anybody know about these?

I used a rope bridge like that already, yeah don't bother, it doesn't work out right. Its made only ot go over deep water, which would look pretty dumb without shallow water around it unless...maybe for a pool?