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Old 07-01-2009, 12:28 AM
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I made this level it took me like 2 hours so let me know what I can do to make it better. My mom said she liked it

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Old 07-01-2009, 12:32 AM
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Old 07-01-2009, 12:42 AM
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Old 07-01-2009, 12:43 AM
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Old 07-01-2009, 12:44 AM
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Ummm where the grass has nothin there put some bushes there some stones some side walks more creative then i think it will look much better
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Old 07-01-2009, 12:45 AM
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Make the features line up better. Paths that don't get suddenly cut off by grass, river shores that don't glitch back and forth, small stuff like that. The simplistic detail isn't too bad though, sometimes simple is good. I don't like some of the other servers now that have tons of detail work on the levelling. It's hard to see, difficult to tell where you can and can't walk, and for those who aren't used to it its impossible to even try to fight in.
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Make the features line up better. Paths that don't get suddenly cut off by grass, river shores that don't glitch back and forth, small stuff like that. The simplistic detail isn't too bad though, sometimes simple is good. I don't like some of the other servers now that have tons of detail work on the levelling. It's hard to see, difficult to tell where you can and can't walk, and for those who aren't used to it its impossible to even try to fight in.
omg why are you ridiculing my level
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make the features line up better. Paths that don't get suddenly cut off by grass, river shores that don't glitch back and forth, small stuff like that. The simplistic detail isn't too bad though, sometimes simple is good. I don't like some of the other servers now that have tons of detail work on the levelling. It's hard to see, difficult to tell where you can and can't walk, and for those who aren't used to it its impossible to even try to fight in.
dont ridicule his level, thats jsut rude
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I love it, it's so bland with amazing usage of tile errors!

I gave it a 2 for being awesome (my scale goes 10-1 not 1-10).
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I love it, it's so bland with amazing usage of tile errors!

I gave it a 2 for being awesome (my scale goes 10-1 not 1-10).
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it look good son maybe u need a fountain in the middle thats y i only gave u 8 points isntead of 10
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ya the light effects make it peppier, i want to beable 2 get paid 2 make lvls
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wtf they r already classic they need to share some of the talent
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ya tig offered 2 pay me 2 make inside lvls 4 gk and so did jerret for zodiac but i didnt want my talent to goto waste on those noob servers
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Old 07-01-2009, 01:49 AM
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Old 07-01-2009, 12:22 PM
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Old 07-01-2009, 12:38 PM
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This level is incredible! I suggest making a tutorial on your incredible detailing, cliffing, and light styles!

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