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Old 04-26-2007, 09:55 PM
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Heres one of my levels.. Just so you know a little how i Level..

I made a simple quick Forest/Vegetation area around a 'pond'..
I raped the swamp grass tiles to bring out the river and pond..

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Old 04-26-2007, 10:14 PM
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Too much detail... But it's still a nice looking level.
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Old 04-26-2007, 10:15 PM
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Too much detail... But it's still a nice looking level.
Yea thanks, i was trying to get that deep forestry look to it.. I should of set the tone for it better though..
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Old 04-26-2007, 10:31 PM
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No problem. I also just noticed a small tile error with a rock overlapping the corner of a tree.
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Old 04-26-2007, 11:50 PM
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I think you should just make a new level. This one isnt really up to par in any situation.
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Old 04-27-2007, 12:04 AM
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No problem. I also just noticed a small tile error with a rock overlapping the corner of a tree.
Oh thanks i see it now...

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I think you should just make a new level. This one isnt really up to par in any situation.
Yea its just a little forest vegetation i thought i should post
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Old 04-27-2007, 03:03 AM
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i dont think that the 4 leaf clover looking thing should be repeted like that
you could make actual bush looking things it would just take a bit more time...
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Old 04-27-2007, 04:07 AM
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The random little circles of grass tiling look like you just wanted to throw some stuff on there.
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Old 04-27-2007, 04:18 AM
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Also the straightness of the grass/water tiles is annoying.
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Old 04-27-2007, 10:13 PM
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The random little circles of grass tiling look like you just wanted to throw some stuff on there.

Well like i said, i made it in a quick 20-30 minutes..
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Old 04-30-2007, 01:08 AM
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The level has potential, but there are too many of those grass patches all over the place. Sometimes things like that look best when not overused.
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Old 04-30-2007, 04:24 AM
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Ok , a few things

First, your avatar, "Official Graal (LAT)." By official, you just work on some ****ty dev server, right? (Hopefully)

Second, as Infernix said, redo the whole level, don't use so many of those clovers.
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Old 04-30-2007, 04:28 AM
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Looks like you slapped a bunch of grass patches and even know how to connect. Level is poorly shaped and detailed.
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Old 04-30-2007, 07:50 AM
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Ok , a few things

First, your avatar, "Official Graal (LAT)." By official, you just work on some ****ty dev server, right? (Hopefully)

Second, as Infernix said, redo the whole level, don't use so many of those clovers.
stop attacking and give suggestions on how you think the level can be made better
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Old 04-30-2007, 12:08 PM
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I like what you're trying to do, even tho it might be unintentionally it doesn't look like every average showoff level, good try.

It doesn't look apealing at all, but keep up the creativity and you might become something. By the way, Joker proves that Darwins evolution theory is correct 100%.
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Old 04-30-2007, 12:17 PM
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Ok , a few things

First, your avatar, "Official Graal (LAT)." By official, you just work on some ****ty dev server, right? (Hopefully)

Second, as Infernix said, redo the whole level, don't use so many of those clovers.
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Old 04-30-2007, 12:45 PM
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Old 05-03-2007, 04:23 AM
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ya lol....before attacking, use common sense..
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