My Era Level

[Spark910]

Well I was looking at the other thread, and then tried to find my old Era levels, couldnt find one.. so made a new one!

Problems with the level:
Not enough inside tiles so it looks empty.
I'd make it smaller but its okay right now for rating.
I used ammo on shelves as I didnt know what else to put there.
Top right, the floor, could do with some extra tiles, but it doesnt look too bad.
I think I rushes the floor, too much blue maybe! Doesnt look as nice as my first ammo mart floor.

What the level is:
Some sort of store, the idea being at the front it looks all fine, but the truth is at the back theres something going on, which is why its a mess and I have used the grey tiles.

Anyhow opinions, I did this fairly quickly as most of its blank =D

[Geno]

I like it.
i really like how you have combined the sort of back security room and the front normal room all into 1 level, that way the non store workers can see the back, i dunno, just something i never see on era, I like it :]

[Spark910]

Originally posted by Geno
I like it.
i really like how you have combined the sort of back security room and the front normal room all into 1 level, that way the non store workers can see the back, i dunno, just something i never see on era, I like it :]

Yeah I went in most of the inside levels and saw that there was not a mix of both. And then I first tried mixing the two together on the same wall but that looked horrid, so I kept it to seperate rooms! =D

[Androk]

Really good job on that level! It's rather fresh, and I like it .

[konidias]

Okay, here is my list:

1) Why are there pieces of carpet all over the wood floor? That's hideous and it really isn't very realistic. It kinda looks like a blue virus is eating up the floor... or there was a flood of square water...

2) To the right (viewer's right) of the door, the wall bends a lot. Why? This has absolutely no structural purpose, and would be extremely idiotic to build into a room. "Gee I know, lets make this wall fold like a vertical staircase and make the insides even smaller!" You have it in the bottom left corner too... I mean, wtf is it?

3) You did the same thing to the bottom right table... plus whoever has to sit there must have to jump over their desk in order to get to their chair... Also, the desk with two registers (I think they are registers?) on it, shouldn't have that skinny area (below the blue trascan) I mean the rest of the table is a lot wider than that, it just looks retarded to have it all as one table. Why is there a microphone halfway on a plant? Is the room bugged?

4) Finally, in the big computer room, why do you have the chairs in odd positions? Like for example, you have this major triple monitor thing in the middle of the desk, but no chair in front of it. You should move the farthest chair to the left, over one tile, so it's in front of the monitors better, and take out the two middle chairs, and put on in the middle of the big triple monitor.

5) the ammo doesn't really fit on the shelves... I hope you noticed that though...

[Spark910]

Originally posted by konidias
Okay, here is my list:

1) Why are there pieces of carpet all over the wood floor? That's hideous and it really isn't very realistic. It kinda looks like a blue virus is eating up the floor... or there was a flood of square water...

2) To the right (viewer's right) of the door, the wall bends a lot. Why? This has absolutely no structural purpose, and would be extremely idiotic to build into a room. "Gee I know, lets make this wall fold like a vertical staircase and make the insides even smaller!" You have it in the bottom left corner too... I mean, wtf is it?

3) You did the same thing to the bottom right table... plus whoever has to sit there must have to jump over their desk in order to get to their chair... Also, the desk with two registers (I think they are registers?) on it, shouldn't have that skinny area (below the blue trascan) I mean the rest of the table is a lot wider than that, it just looks retarded to have it all as one table. Why is there a microphone halfway on a plant? Is the room bugged?

4) Finally, in the big computer room, why do you have the chairs in odd positions? Like for example, you have this major triple monitor thing in the middle of the desk, but no chair in front of it. You should move the farthest chair to the left, over one tile, so it's in front of the monitors better, and take out the two middle chairs, and put on in the middle of the big triple monitor.

5) the ammo doesn't really fit on the shelves... I hope you noticed that though...

1) Yeah I didnt like that too much. It can look good, i'll remake it later.

2) Its a wall. Well a graal wall. I was bored of just striaght walls. (lol edits it from what it was before, if you were quick you saw what it said)

3) Who said its a table? Work surfaces are perfectly buyable and useable and I have seen many shops with thin > thick bits.

4) Eras GFX, and anyway they are slightly to the right of they keyboards, my chair is like that now.

5) Yeah I did, its the tile size, image size and me only bothering to correct it to .5

And the bottom right desk. There could be a door on the right.

[Snakeandy7]

:o, Not to be mean to era but.. i think that's one of the best era level's ive seen, try a outside

[Spark910]

Originally posted by Snakeandy7
:o, Not to be mean to era but.. i think that's one of the best era level's ive seen, try a outside

I've started a bravo level now
I'll do an outside after that =D

[Snakeandy7]

Heh, Bravo will allway's suck to me :/

[tlf288]

Originally posted by Spark910


I've started a bravo level now
I'll do an outside after that =D

Like a Bravo level will be any different than an Era level, hehe.

[Spark910]

Originally posted by tlf288


Like a Bravo level will be any different than an Era level, hehe.

lol =D
Yeah well it looks awful, as they have 5 type of tiles in one tileset:

Original Graal Tiles
Glub Glubs eXoida Tiles
Gravo Gangsta Tiles
Era Style Tiles

Its a bit of a mess.

[bigdawg1003]

Kinda reminds me of Era's Ammo Mart...But then again its like Ammo Mart Advanced (And like Koni said) It looks like its been flooded with square water

[Myomoto]

it's nice, but i have to agree with koni about the floor ;D

[CheeToS2]

I agree with most of koni's points, and
1) The safe is crushing a gun? O_o
2) The fire extinguisher is behind the plant and a huge gun, what if there was a real emergency?
3) Theres a piece of paper under the plant and the other safe..? O_o

overall I like the level though :grin:

[Spark910]

Originally posted by CheeToS2
I agree with most of koni's points, and
1) The safe is crushing a gun? O_o
2) The fire extinguisher is behind the plant and a huge gun, what if there was a real emergency?
3) Theres a piece of paper under the plant and the other safe..? O_o

overall I like the level though :grin:

Its supposed to be a mess in there. Its not crushing the gun, its infront of the gun. And lol they burn. Well no its easy to pick it up still .

[jrm_iii]

how do you get the era tileset?