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Old 12-30-2002, 11:22 AM
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Now that I have access to the forums again, I decided to post another level that I just whipped up...

I know that there are some errors, and it isn't perfect, but its 2 AM and the sound of my fingers hitting the keyboard is probably keeping my parents up x.x(they complained about it before)...

I have serious problems connecting waterfalls to the rivers and with the cliffs, but I couldn't find a way to fix it...

The top right corner lacks intrest, but im to tired to do anything about that...

Ahh, well, please rate out of 10, and add some comments...
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Old 12-30-2002, 03:28 PM
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7/10

Nice Level
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Old 12-30-2002, 03:35 PM
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the sound of my fingers hitting the keyboard is probably keeping my parents up x.x(they complained about it before)...[/b]
Use that on screen keyboard where you can click keys with the mouse.


No explicit rating, but I think the cliff edges are too "sharp" or whatever. Basically all your tile-type-changes are strangely shaped. Also, I think that your way of filling grass areas is too random. And in the sand areas, too many stones are there, and to close to each other.
But overall it looks nice
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Old 12-30-2002, 05:39 PM
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I like what you did with some of the tiles in that level (The graveyard gate things) VERY nice, except I think you should add a little more detail to the grass.

8/10
-EDIT- I just noticed the cliffs..They are pointy o_O

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Old 12-30-2002, 05:58 PM
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I agree with Loriel. The cliffs look too "sharp." Also, the sand to water part looks "sharp" and pointy too. I would change that. I dislike the clumped rocks and the half grass tiles.

It's a good start, but needs work.

Rating: 4 out of 10
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Old 12-30-2002, 09:41 PM
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You need some straight bits on the cliff, its all to up and down, up and down, it doesnt look nice when its like that! And also detail to the grass, have a look on the tileset for a while...
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Old 01-02-2003, 07:42 AM
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X_x rating: 5/10

the tiling arent nice, this half grass tiles are liek omg :x




The layout of the level are good, thinking but tiling :x :x

oh well try to take whole grass tiles, cut swamps etc etc...


Bushes also.... But if you didnt now, when you add bushes you stick them together...

nice beach, could been better but its nice.

Keep up the work on it
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