My first level I tried on...

joseyisleet · #1 03-05-2002, 06:52 AM

-=Josey=-
Ok, I know this isn't the best level you've ever seen. All I was going for is to make it not the worse you've ever seen. I tried mixing a few styles I got from the forum and a few from some friends. Tell me what you think. Praise it or criticise it, both will make me better. ;]

joseyisleet · #2 03-05-2002, 06:53 AM

-=Josey=-
Eck, forgot to attach it. ;X

darkriders_p2p · #3 03-05-2002, 08:01 AM

semi good, I dislike the doors, the don't fit at all, try doorenigmaup.png or something, the give it the cabin look.And the lamp images are missing which take away the effect of a very good level.

happyme · #4 03-05-2002, 10:27 AM

more texture please!

BARGAD · #5 03-05-2002, 10:22 PM

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Originally posted by joseyisleet
-=Josey=-
Eck, forgot to attach it. ;X

Please... attach it as a png file... ^_^

darkriders_p2p · #6 03-06-2002, 01:23 AM

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originally posted by BARGAD
Please... attach it as a png file... ^_^

She is posting the level so you can see the light effects and the whole level.

BARGAD · #7 03-06-2002, 02:43 AM

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Originally posted by darkriders_p2p

She is posting the level so you can see the light effects and the whole level.

The whole level can be posted as a screenshot... and I can´t see lightingeffects anyway

darkriders_p2p · #8 03-06-2002, 03:11 AM

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originally posted by BARGAD
The whole level can be posted as a screenshot... and I can´t see lightingeffects anyway

She wasn't thinking of you when she posted the level, screenies aren't always good enough.

joseyisleet · #9 03-06-2002, 10:47 AM

-=Josey=-

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Originally posted by darkriders_p2p

She wasn't thinking of you when she posted the level, screenies aren't always good enough.

She is not a she, she is a he. The correct spelling for female is "Josie", and the male is "Josey". I don't have time to really do anything anymore, work sucks. Oh well. Later.

RamiAharonov · #10 03-06-2002, 11:23 AM

for the lazy

SaijinGohan · #11 03-07-2002, 04:06 AM

Well it isnt the worst I have EVER seen but it almost is. First off the buildings throw the whole seen of whack, use something more outdoorsey. Also you made a path and copied and pasted the same block over and over again, try being origional. Show the lamps. To much grass in once concentrated area, spread it out and add some flowers. The swamp grass looks horrible. The trees need to be more plentiful and not in a diagonal row. Add some water also.

SaijinGohan · #12 03-07-2002, 04:36 AM

Heres what I feel the level should look like in .png

SaijinGohan · #13 03-07-2002, 04:37 AM

And heres the level itself....

Qwert616 · #14 03-07-2002, 04:40 AM

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Originally posted by SaijinGohan
Heres what I feel the level should look like in .png

hm, I the house on the top looks better, but I like the old house on the bottom instead.

I also didn't like what you did to the path. It looks pretty plain now.

Lao_Su2 · #15 03-07-2002, 04:43 AM

It looks to copy and pasted take the time to be original and more times then others it will make the level better

NeoNPL · #16 03-07-2002, 05:29 PM

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Originally posted by joseyisleet
-=Josey=-
Ok, I know this isn't the best level you've ever seen. All I was going for is to make it not the worse you've ever seen. I tried mixing a few styles I got from the forum and a few from some friends. Tell me what you think. Praise it or criticise it, both will make me better. ;]

Its ok but i dont like the houses or the grass you used too much of the grass 'standing up' tiles. The houses dont look right either , try developing your own style.