Rate my newb level

mercenary917 · #1 02-13-2004, 01:51 PM

Fear my newbness! And rate it

bigdawg1003 · #2 02-13-2004, 02:16 PM

Looks kinda plain. The path needs to have more movement in it. And get rid of some of the trees and add detail to the level like cliffs maybe.

WanDaMan · #3 02-13-2004, 02:44 PM

Thats not a ****ie level, you lie!

'1337'
Nice job :]

mercenary917 · #4 02-13-2004, 02:55 PM

TY

I've added some julels and a few rocks, also the path is meant to be straight. :P

If you're lucky I might show you the rest of my house.

WanDaMan · #5 02-13-2004, 03:04 PM

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Originally posted by mercenary917
TY

I've added some julels and a few rocks, also the path is meant to be straight. :P

If you're lucky I might show you the rest of my house.

Nice jules!!
I like the level it rocks, if you need help on how to do tree's or something I can help you, AIM me later (i'll pm it).
The tree tup right make the top 'treetop.gif' so it looks nicer

Crono · #6 02-13-2004, 04:34 PM

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Originally posted by WanDaMan
Thats not a ****ie level, you lie!
'1337'
Nice job :]

I'm never asking you to help me with levels again >:O! You're too EASY. I'll just summon Nish and Vik whenever I need them, bwahahaha. <3 for wan though

WanDaMan · #7 02-13-2004, 05:26 PM

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Originally posted by Gerami

I'm never asking you to help me with levels again >:O! You're too EASY. I'll just summon Nish and Vik whenever I need them, bwahahaha. <3 for wan though

I'm confusled, I bet you are for my new spelling of Confused? :P

mercenary917 · #8 02-13-2004, 05:32 PM

It's spelt confuzzled!

And I though I'd stick this one I just made on here..

WanDaMan · #9 02-13-2004, 05:34 PM

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Originally posted by mercenary917
It's spelt confuzzled!

And I though I'd stick this one I just made on here..

I miss them styles, nice level again you're quite fast at making levels

Genesis · #10 02-13-2004, 06:01 PM

Yea you can tell ur new at level making just stick with it youll get better.

ETD · #11 02-13-2004, 06:22 PM

ways to improve your levels:

1. clump some of the trees together!

2. spend more time on your paths!

3. use other ground detailing images, such as the swamp tiles and such

just my opinion though

mercenary917 · #12 02-13-2004, 06:38 PM

1. The trees shall be clumped! Now that Wan has shown me how

2. No! Too lazy. Lol j/k I will.

3. Ok.

WanDaMan · #13 02-13-2004, 07:26 PM

ETD · #14 02-13-2004, 08:04 PM

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Originally posted by WanDaMan
<3

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Originally posted by ETD
Working hard to get to 1,000 posts Wan?
:P

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will the spam end when you reach 1k?
o.o

zell12 · #15 02-13-2004, 09:51 PM

You can't make levels in 5 minutes, so don't try to.

I get bored and angry sometimes when doing detail on my levels, takes so l o n g to do it the way I want, and sometimes I wished I would hit a buttion and it did the detail the way I want to, but, meh. Have some patence, and if you get stressed, take a break.

WanDaMan · #16 02-13-2004, 10:10 PM

It's not spam though '<3

'M3, heart.

because i helped him. both mean something

mercenary917 · #17 02-14-2004, 01:54 AM

Ok, I think the swamp grass stuff looks a bit odd but it adds a bit more variety.

zell12 · #18 02-14-2004, 03:44 AM

If you want a honest opinion, it is all garbage.

But if you want me to be nice and tell you something that gives you shivers down your back and the tingling-feeling on your neck, then the level is ok and deserves a 10/10.

The paths are too straight, you have lava tiles on grass in a square, some big square castle thing, tile errors on the julies, and where is the trees grouping? I see like 2 groups. lol

ETD · #19 02-14-2004, 04:11 AM

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Originally posted by zell12
The paths are too straight, you have lava tiles on grass in a square, some big square castle thing, tile errors on the julies, and where is the trees grouping? I see like 2 groups. lol

that's all true
:o
here's a sample of the type of detail/paths I <3
(true, it uses an old version of the End of Ages tileset... but you can get the point)

Kingtofu · #20 02-14-2004, 04:28 AM

For a veteran, yes, it's garbage. For someone new to level making, it's 24 karat gold. You seem very eager to mix things up, though the big problem with that is the tile errors that follow. If you don't know what that means, a basic definition would be when the tiles don't match up. You can get a better one from someone else. Keep at it.

WanDaMan · #21 02-14-2004, 12:04 PM

I'll post my path I used later :-)

WanDaMan · #22 02-14-2004, 12:19 PM

My paths: see attachment!
Nothing fancy or anything, just a path :O!

Sorry double posting, was on t'other comp when I posted that :-)

bigdawg1003 · #23 02-14-2004, 03:19 PM

Hmm..I need to get back into level making.

zell12 · #24 02-14-2004, 10:11 PM

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Originally posted by WanDaMan
My paths: see attachment!
Nothing fancy or anything, just a path :O!

Sorry double posting, was on t'other comp when I posted that :-)

Only thing bad about that is the two different styles + the path, and things look stuck there and not attached.

WanDaMan · #25 02-14-2004, 10:13 PM

I see what you mean, I would post the actuall level (with the path like that) but I guess you will see it soon :-)

Nitkizi · #26 02-15-2004, 05:27 AM

This reminds me of my first levels back when I used to.

Just keep at it like others have said, look around some playerworlds on the classic list and take note of the detailing styles and stuff so you pretty much know the standard level of detail and stuff on Graal. Then just play around with stuff until you get your own style and feeling for leveling stuff that flows together well.