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Old 01-17-2004, 08:15 AM
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It is an inside level, supposed to have a kind of private resturant feel.
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Old 01-17-2004, 12:11 PM
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Like the walls, floor is ok, content sucks. :x
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Old 01-17-2004, 07:57 PM
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It is waaaay too plain and empty, buddy.
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Old 01-17-2004, 08:47 PM
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I think those walls look ugly
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Old 01-17-2004, 11:32 PM
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its a littlebit empty..

but I never saw thise kind of walls
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Old 01-18-2004, 05:32 AM
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Ahh weak Mykel, the walls are bad. Floor is very plain. Nothing's in the room but tables. I was wondering who made that when I saw it on delt...blegh.
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Old 01-19-2004, 05:58 PM
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Plain, especially with the dumb tables x-x
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Old 01-19-2004, 09:05 PM
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Arg, if you want to use them red/blue tiles you need to make design patterns on the floor. And the walls, are not meant to be. Sorry.
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Old 01-21-2004, 06:42 PM
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It looks like you made half an attemp to make the room with depth.. but lost it when you made the lamps fully showing and the floor border showing all the way around too.. even in the area where it should go behind the wall and be hidden.

The colours clash to much and doesnt look very nice. Need to keep to either the reds or the blues. If you use the castle tile walls I suggest reb flooring.

Walls.... they... could maybe look good. But I don't very much like them to be truthfull. It looks to chunky and all bricks being the same size makes it lose depth too.

Tables and chairs look wrong.. they just look they have been thrown in place. No order in place.

Over all its a bittle boring and bland. Nothing really exciting and that grabs your attention to it.

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Old 01-21-2004, 09:12 PM
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I don't mind those walls, but think they would be better suited toward an Egyptian tombish level.
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I love it, 10/10

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Old 01-21-2004, 10:38 PM
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Like everyone else has mentioned, the walls need to be changed. :o
Overall it really isnt all that bad.
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Old 01-21-2004, 11:04 PM
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Wow, this level really blows. Sorry for wasting you guys time. Lol.


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Old 01-22-2004, 02:43 AM
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:18 AM
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Like everyone else has mentioned, the walls need to be changed. :o
Overall it really isnt all that bad.
Yea it is.
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:21 AM
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Yea it is.
Dude, please don't be so outright negative. If you're going to tell someone their level sucks, atleast have some backing, or tips to make it better... There aren't many level makers around anymore... We don't need them being scared off because some guy told them they suck and should delete the hard drive or some stuffs like that. ;O
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:22 AM
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Hey Spanky did it to me when I was a **** it didnot do nothing to me but encourage me.
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:24 AM
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Hey Spanky did it to me when I was a **** it didnot do nothing to me but encourage me.
You aren't everybody. Positive re-enforcement works far better than negative... And doesn't leave behind spite and nasty rivalries.
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:27 AM
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You aren't everybody. Positive re-enforcement works far better than negative... And doesn't leave behind spite and nasty rivalries.
This is just a GAME thats it I dont take any grudges with any one and if any of you have grudges against me well thats just sad.
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:30 AM
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This is just a GAME thats it I dont take any grudges with any one and if any of you have grudges against me well thats just sad.
Sad as it may be, what will it hurt you to be positive, or atleast more specific with why you think people's things suck? That's all I'm asking, guy.
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:35 AM
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Sad as it may be, what will it hurt you to be positive, or atleast more specific with why you think people's things suck? That's all I'm asking, guy.
Im sorry that you dont like my ways I just treat people the way I was treated I guess I will change



Things wrong with the level.

The walls are bad maybe trying a diff style it would make the level look a lot better.

The floor
its just plain and ordinary nothing to brag about .
Try making the level look more exciting and not so boring.

the guy in the front is ok but try adding diff gfx to the level to make it look more professional and not so tacky such as the lamps and ect.

If you fixed the level I would like to see what it looks like when you are done.
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Old 01-22-2004, 04:37 AM
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Im sorry that you dont like my ways I just treat people the way I was treated I guess I will change
That just makes an endless paradoxial(sp?... WORD?) loop. Thanks though...
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Old 01-23-2004, 01:13 AM
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Hey Spanky did it to me when I was a **** it didnot do nothing to me but encourage me.
you still are a newb so shush.
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Dont listen to them its great.
Only thing i would change is the bar table when you enter id move it back a bit or find a different spot.

Dont listen to those people saying its too plain.
**** them
I hate all these new lvls that come out lately, Using detail that isnt even needed and making the level look like crap and just bad on the eyes.

They arent from the days before the old tileset when levels didnt have to have so much detail that isnt needed and plain lvls looked great.
we need to bring the old tileset back ,
no offence koni but the new tileset sucks, the trees look ugly , the house tiles dont match so you have to find other ways to make them match and it makes houses look ugly as hell.
you coulda at least made them match it takes maybe 20 minutes.
We have been stuck with these unmatching house tiles for too long and it just pisses me off.

Damn just thought id get that off my chest
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Old 01-24-2004, 08:10 AM
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Dont listen to them its great.
Only thing i would change is the bar table when you enter id move it back a bit or find a different spot.

Dont listen to those people saying its too plain.
**** them
I hate all these new lvls that come out lately, Using detail that isnt even needed and making the level look like crap and just bad on the eyes.

They arent from the days before the old tileset when levels didnt have to have so much detail that isnt needed and plain lvls looked great.
we need to bring the old tileset back ,
no offence koni but the new tileset sucks, the trees look ugly , the house tiles dont match so you have to find other ways to make them match and it makes houses look ugly as hell.
you coulda at least made them match it takes maybe 20 minutes.
We have been stuck with these unmatching house tiles for too long and it just pisses me off.

Damn just thought id get that off my chest
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If you're talking about the bricks on the house walls, I agree, I prefered the old style wall.
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Old 01-24-2004, 10:21 AM
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Dont listen to them its great.
Dont listen to those people saying its too plain.
**** them
Im not going to be tooooo much against you know, but if he wouldn't listen on the obvious and listen to you, the world would be odd, the levels need improvements.
Just work on it more and i think it can become something Mykel.
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Old 01-25-2004, 10:36 PM
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Kadar, he asked for our opinons so we gave. The majority of people say its to plain. Now I agree that I rather the normal tile set rather than the ones comming out these days.. But I still think making levels in that tile set should still look original, neat, and nice.

The thing with anything is that you cannot go by one man, its what the majority wants that really needs to be done.
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Old 01-31-2004, 08:20 PM
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you still are a newb so shush.
Ahah lol Gen is cool... sometimes.
Also I hard on all level makers.. aren't I Eric? When Eric started I didn't baby him and he got better because I said his stuff sucked.

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It is an inside level, supposed to have a kind of private resturant feel.
Actually it is not the bad.. The floor I don't like but I think it would look nice on 2001 because the server has a nice verity of inside levels that are all unique and different.
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Ahah lol Gen is cool... sometimes.
Also I hard on all level makers.. aren't I Eric? When Eric started I didn't baby him and he got better because I said his stuff sucked.



Actually it is not the bad.. The floor I don't like but I think it would look nice on 2001 because the server has a nice verity of inside levels that are all unique and different.
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It's a good level; reminds me of Delteria but more to this day.
It's a nice style very unique!.
I like it all but the walls mainly because they don't look like walls all the rest is great.
It's a great level, 7/10.
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