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Old 08-25-2003, 04:46 AM
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RP News: A Death and a new Shadow

Gryffon Durime is dead, killed by the General of mysterious new race known as the Sauros. Sauros are lizardmen who follow Shamanistic tradition and obey the wishes of the Earth Goddess, Gaia.
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Old 08-25-2003, 04:53 AM
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Old 08-25-2003, 04:59 AM
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I let myself die.
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:21 AM
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So, care to share information about your new character?
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:22 AM
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So, care to share information about your new character?
He probally wont share that information untill kingdoms come out.
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:32 AM
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Damn, i need to hear a Good role-player's story heh.
I know i'll love it because gryffon does not make his characters super gods with xxxxxxxxx dbz powers o.o
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:34 AM
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:37 AM
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I let myself die.
Well that was silly now wasn't it?
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:37 AM
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I let myself die.
wtf i was there you were like NO PLZ NO then he owned you with his shadow stick!

this must be the new tribe thingy brad told me about. he said it was lizard people though, not shadow people.
kinda like vermans old kingdom he was talking about with the lizard men.
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:39 AM
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wtf i was there you were like NO PLZ NO then he owned you with his shadow stick!

this must be the new tribe thingy brad told me about. he said it was lizard people though, not shadow people.
kinda like vermans old kingdom he was talking about with the lizard men.
I've found the Orc kingdom, but I don't see these as the same thing.
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:41 AM
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I've found the Orc kingdom, but I don't see these as the same thing.

I want a frog kingdom >=(.
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Old 08-25-2003, 05:51 AM
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I've found the Orc kingdom, but I don't see these as the same thing.
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oops i thought he said shadow men when infact he did say lizardmen!
no brad is like leading this kingdom i think.
the lizard one.
he PMed me saying ar eyou gonna join my kingdoma nd i was like negaive roger over and out plz
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Old 08-25-2003, 03:21 PM
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Damn, i need to hear a Good role-player's story heh.
I know i'll love it because gryffon does not make his characters super gods with xxxxxxxxx dbz powers o.o
Neither does anybody else on this server.

Except those who came from UN. *shudder*
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Old 08-25-2003, 07:00 PM
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I thought Brad would be able to lead "Zorbi"
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Old 08-25-2003, 07:25 PM
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Re: RP News: A Death and a new Shadow

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the Earth Goddess, Gaia.
somebody is watching too much captain planet
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Old 08-25-2003, 07:56 PM
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lol, gaia is greece i think, isn't it? Wait a moment please... *finds book of ancient greece mythology* Yup, 100% ancient greece mythology word for, "mother earth" or to put it in another way, earth goodes :]

EDIT: Shounds kinda cool, if my role play char wasn't a elf ;O
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Old 08-25-2003, 09:41 PM
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WHERE ARE KINGDOMS.
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Old 08-25-2003, 11:32 PM
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WHERE ARE KINGDOMS.
Soon mr Size 50 when max is 7... very soon.


And emily... an RP story would be like this

'Found in a basket on the sea shore an elderly married pair found Zurkiba. They adopted him and gave him the name of Obu Cooky. They raised him and gave the general welfare of him a lot of attention of funds. He was trained in the powers of magic, as his new father was allready a master of.

He does not believe in violence, he tries to stop street fights when he sees them by preaching from the holy texts of the ancestors.'

blah blah blah
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Old 08-25-2003, 11:49 PM
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You know what they say, Death is only a state of mind. I will promise you that no power possible in RP can ressurect Gryffon, however. So I'm not gonna pull a Kamoo and say that Alkaren ressurected me
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Old 08-25-2003, 11:52 PM
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My character must never die :x i put to much work into her.
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Old 08-25-2003, 11:54 PM
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I could post some of my stories, buy you guys would steal my characters heh.
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:00 AM
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:01 AM
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Gideon Princeps, brother of Ishmael Princeps, is a Mage a mage of water.
He just started training therefore knows very little magic, and is not trained
with more than a crude dagger. He is a a little shy and not sure of himself, He
was born into a family of Water Mages.

Old one heh
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:20 AM
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Be sure to look out for a temporary chracter who's makign a special apperance. A brand new Durime.
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:30 AM
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:34 AM
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The Story of the Cactus Crew
by: Gideon Princeps of the Cactus Crew

The Cactus Crew was founded by two of the toughest outlaws around, Gideon Princeps and Geno. They decided that since no-one else accepted them, they would start their own organization. They called it the Cactus Crew, as their clubhouse/town was in the desert among the cacti. They would accept all the outlaws and scum that would come with them, they decided it would be run as a family, with all members having a voice, an opinion, but they(gideon and geno) would have the final say. They live in the desert among the cacti, so not to be persecuted by the people of the world. They still carry on their outlawish and theiving ways, but come back to the desert to hide. In the desert they have a sanctuary, where the weak could never penetrate, only the strongest of outlanders(non-cactus crew) could even sneak a peek at the fort, Fort Cactus, where they live. Not much more is known about these outlaws and thieves.
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:39 AM
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Basicly, Geno and Gideon adopted a family of theives and Geno is the Dad and Gideon is the Mom j/k.

The Durimes are a family of reformed Daveons, a race of black winged avaians with bloodlusting natures, much like vultures and other carrion birds. By clipping their wings, They abandoned the shadow magic held by their bretheren and the Durime clan was born.
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Emily Tannare Part I:
Emily was born to the Tannares, Tom and Jane Tannare. There live was peaceful until Emily's birth, where cursed luck appeared. While hunting, Tom Tannare was killed. No one ever was able to find the beast who did this. Jane was stricken, and knew that Emily was their only left lovechild and nurtured her.
She taught Emily violin, and taught her ways of kindness. Emily, at seven, dedicated to live life as a vegetarian, in hopes that kindness could be forged between her and animal/monsters. At fourteen, Jane was called upon to fight off the monsters in town, because she was the only one able to defeat the monsters beating through the town. Jane told Emily that it was a simple problem, but Jane didn't return. Emily repeated to herself," I know she's coming back. She can't leave me!"
Life went like this for two weeks straight, until she received notice from the council. "Your mother is alive, and is sent to the best healers and mid-wife (For the pain, of course)". Emily traveled to the town until she could reach the town.
"I'm sorry, but Mrs. Tannare is dead," repeated the healer.
Emily, filled with anguish, ran as far as she could. Monsters didn't scare her. Beasts were Childs play. She didn't care. Now, Emily had nothing tied to her town. No one there understood, and Emily needed time. She returned to her hometown to pack. She searched for 6 days until she came upon an abandoned cabin in the middle of a forest.
She cleaned up the small cabin, personalizing it, and in the end, calling it home. She enjoyed her freedom, and visited the small villas near her to pick the necessities like pure salt, food, and water.
While in that town, she met many friendly people, including one who was a violinist. "Are you carrying a violin?" Said the violinist "Ya know, you could probably try to get into the concert hall.
Emily's eyes beamed at the thought! What a great way to earn money! So, she was off. She played her violin until 16, then moved to help in the fields of a farmer, holding violin as just a hobby. In 17, she heard of the riches in Anktora and out she went to find herself.
Once she reached Anktora, she realized THIS was her ideal home. She went and settled down in Anktora. There was no crime or pollution, but there was one thing about Anktora that made it a little unsafe. Once or twice a year dragons would come down from the mountains and rampage through Anktora; luckily, the forest was left unguarded and the people fled their for a day, She made many friends in Anktora
but as Always her cursed luck Ruined everything..One day she was playing the Violin in the Village Centre having a good Time and she was Going to light a Candle and then Something came inside of her and made her throw the Match she was using on a house and half the village burnt down the Villagers thought she had Done this on Purpose so they Banished her from the Village so she Went off in search of a
new Home and then she found the land of Graal there was lots of violence here and not everyone treated her very well but she Felt like it was home..so now she lives in the land of Graal, From then on, Emily's life has been good and from then on until one day a young witch with jet black long hair and blazing green eyes came up to her
and said "Your the one" Emily asked "Excuse me?" and she said once again "Your the one" And emily asked "I'm the one?" and she said "Yes, ive been looking for a Sorceress to train and..i can tell it...Your the one." Emily asked "Me?! a..Sorceress!?" and she said ......(
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:42 AM
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Those stories are void, staff voided CC, and Gideon is on VAL.
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Part II: ((Took out everythign that had to do with graal2001 since i left))
"Yes, if you say yes i can teach you all about magic how to ride a summon creatures and so much more."
Emily said "Wow..me..a Sorceress..i would love to! where and when shall we start my training?" she said "Tommorow. 10PM..meet me in the town centre" Emily said "Ok."Emily went straight home thought about becoming a Sorceress and then layed down in her bed and went to sleep right away.
Emily woke up and brushed her hair put on a black top and a red skirt and went outside, she contined to think about casting spells and healing the unfortunate and the thought made her so exited..she waited inside all day thinking about it until 9:30 came around and she put on her boots and began to walk to the Town Centre,
She made her way to the town centre and met the girl she said "Follow me" so emily obeyed her and followed her to a small dark cabin out in the woods.emily began to think 'I don't really know her..i hope shes not some killer or something' and of course she wasen't the girl said "Ok first we need to teach you a few spells" and so emily said "Ok." Emily spent hours trying to cast a simple light spell but she couldent do it until 3 hours later..then
she began working on more and more spells and started to learn alot..
And emily said "ok, also what is your name? my name is Emily" and the girl said "Call me Angela"
to teach you how to become a Good Witch" Emily said "Thank you! when will i see you again" and the girl said "Theres no need for that now i must go" and she vanished into thin air..Emily gasped and waited a while but she didn't come back so Emily left to go home looked at everything read a small bit in the book and realised that i was 3:00AM in the morning and layed down on the bed for she was so tired and slept until 2:00PM in the afternoon the next day she got up read some more and then sat down and thought.
Emily has found alot more about herself since she became a witch... she was playing her Violin the other day and all the sudden she started playing a beautiful song and then she remembered that her mother taught it to her right when she Gave emily her Violin.. so Emily often plays the song in town for money and such.
Emily has been learning many new songs on her Violin lately and people seem to enjoy them but of course some didn't like them and flamed her for playing them. one day emily played a song outside of her house and a young boy about 14 came up to her and said "That is the most awful thing my ear has ever heard" Emily said "Excuse Me?" and he said "You heard me!" Emily got really mad and went out into the woods and went quite far to.. she stayed out there until night and then she tried to find her way back home
she looked and looked went every path and somehow she just coulden't find home each path lead back to each other so she sat down and started to Cry until she heard something in the bushes... she yelled "Hello!?" and a small man with a long black beard came out and striked her with a cane and she started to twist and turn and started to shrink down into a small creature and she screamed "What is happened to me!?" and the man in a grumpy voice replied "i have transformed you into a green blob." she screamed "WHAT!?!? WHY!?!?!" and he said "I didn't mean to." and she said "I DEMAND YOU TO TURN ME BACK!" and he replied "I can
t the only way for you to turn back is to search for a transformer." she said "WHAT!!!?! IT'S ALL YOU'RE FAULT YOU MUST HELP ME!" he said "I will not take this." and vanished.. Emily looked at her strange new body and screeched but somehow as soon as she searched for home she found it.. she got home and opened the door with her feet then hopped on the bed and started to think how people would treat her as a green blob would people believe it was her and how she could be cured and then after that she layed down and tried to go to sleep.
Five days later emily decided to go on a search for a magician that she has heard can transform.. she searched and asked one of the villagers ... the villager looked at her and said "How can you talk! you-your a blob! emily replied "Not originally, a wizard turned me into one and i need a cure, can you help me?" the villager said "The magician Arkanica shall help you. northeast is where his hut is."
Emily replied with a thank you and continued searching for the magician know to help beings with these kind of problems.. she searched for an hour or two and she finally found him.. he was quit fine looking.. tall, dark headed and a sexy voice she spoke "Can you help me turn back into a human" He said "Yes, i need no details i will do it right away" he striked his hand at her and started to chant and soon emily started to twist and turn and turn into a tall attractive human being she originally was.
She ran up to him and hugged him and said "OH!! THANK YOU SOO MUCH!" then realised what she had just done and backed away and blushed he giggled and said "No problem, i'd do anything for an atrractive girl like you ::winks::" she blushed and said "ok.. thank you i will talk to you later.. i hope"
And emily ran home and started to jump for joy and layed down on her bed and started to sleep.
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Basicly, Geno and Gideon adopted a family of theives and Geno is the Dad and Gideon is the Mom j/k.

The Durimes are a family of reformed Daveons, a race of black winged avaians with bloodlusting natures, much like vultures and other carrion birds. By clipping their wings, They abandoned the shadow magic held by their bretheren and the Durime clan was born.
I remember when you first joined dustari pirate crew captured you, and me and ghost drowned you in the pit of hell
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:47 AM
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Wow. For 1, Paragraphs PLEASE. It's not that good.
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I haven't really made a story for Peg Leg....but Cloud le Fay's story is pretty
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Uhh, you story was short and boring.
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PEGLEG? You were the one that got me possesed....*Goes down to the fires of hell, shining brilliant white admist the dark fires* The Lich Lord and I will be having a chat *Pulls out a Hammer of Smiting Evil +4346543674358764357346Blue23839128740*
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Old 08-26-2003, 12:54 AM
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Uhh, you story was short and boring.
Short and to the point.
I couldn't even finish yours, but what I read was bad.
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Old 08-26-2003, 01:02 AM
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Uhh, you story was short and boring.
his story was more compact. You dont need to give every detail. Either way, your story is like every other story. parents die. girl goes off in world alone. ;p i didnt like your story because it was silly, and there were too many run on sentences.
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Old 08-26-2003, 01:03 AM
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Yes, it's very long and detailed.
I need to get alot of the grammar fixed but other then that it's ok.
It used to be longer but it had stuff about Graal2001 on it and i left it so yea now i can use that character anywhere.
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Old 08-26-2003, 01:04 AM
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My story was originial.
And easy to read.
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Old 08-26-2003, 01:05 AM
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How was mine not original and how was it hard to read? are you dumb or what? can you read?
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