Rate my level.

Crono · #1 08-01-2003, 11:22 PM

I made this about a month ago and since everyone posts their levels here..I decided to join the 1337 crew (lol o_o) and post my not-so-good levels.

I need this to be rated and need advice. Thanks in advance. ^_^!

Crono · #2 08-01-2003, 11:23 PM

And here it is in game. (Since the top one doesn't show the waterfall/npcs...

tlf288 · #3 08-01-2003, 11:32 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Gerami
my not-so-good levels.

You're absolutely right here, dude.

Crono · #4 08-01-2003, 11:41 PM

Yeah, well tell me how to improve rather than ignoring everything else I posted.

Myomoto · #5 08-02-2003, 12:51 AM

on a scale of 1 to 10, 4...
Hmm... the waterfal seems to change color when it goes from tileset to NPC, the river at the top looks wierd, dunno why, i just think it looks wierd. Add some more stones at the lake and some stones and mushrooms at the ground

And those two bushes at the trees, remove one of em, they stand like they where statues placed by people... I don't know art, but i know what i like! (Translation, i can't do levels! :P)

Judge_S · #6 08-02-2003, 12:55 AM

I really like the idea of being able to be seen behind a waterfall. But perhaps a chair wasn't the best way to go about it.

Crono · #7 08-02-2003, 01:04 AM

Let me fix them up according to both of your posts..

What should I add behind the waterfall, though?

Myomoto · #8 08-02-2003, 01:07 AM

A cave, duh!

Crono · #9 08-02-2003, 01:09 AM

I meant..instead of a chair..I still like my chair idea :[

Myomoto · #10 08-02-2003, 01:15 AM

Add chair out side of the waterfall, a little bit away from it, like making some kind of rest place to meditate near the shound of the waterfall

Crono · #11 08-02-2003, 01:21 AM

Ok I fixed some stuff..until I find out what to do with the waterfall (its drawoverplayer; and semi-transperant) i'm leaving it there :X!

Snakeandy7 · #12 08-02-2003, 02:41 AM

I kinda like it then i dont know. i dont know what i like ;o, anywho its nice, btw i am !Wan's Brother Chrono, hehe

CheeToS2 · #13 08-02-2003, 04:12 AM

if you just remove the waterfall tiles & leave the npc, it should be fine there.. but the side of the cliff & the sides of the river seem waaay too repetitive to me. :x
5/10

Crono · #14 08-02-2003, 06:54 PM

Ok, I edited some stuff. Any better :X?

Crono · #15 08-02-2003, 06:54 PM

And here it is in game..

Snakeandy7 · #16 08-02-2003, 09:11 PM

Sorry, but dont change it anymore, they dislike the level, you and i like it.. (well i like it

), You have your style they haver there's *Dunno if they can make level's*
Anyhow, nice level

If you want me n Wan will help you on it, Wan will talk to you on Val

Myomoto · #17 08-03-2003, 12:16 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Gerami
And here it is in game..

Much better that wins a 6,5/10! try as CheeToS said, don't use waterfall tiles, just use the NPC

And move the chair outside the waterfall :o
I love the work with mushrooms and stones! Good level!