Rate this Outisde level

[Genesis]

ok here is a level i made just wanted to know if u guys like it
there is one with lights and the other without lights

[Genesis]

and the one without lights it's a fullfull level too

[Ducati_Link]

Nice level.
The house looks a tad odd though. I think it's how the roof goes over the building.. and the the top bit where the roof goes under it. Maybe pole at the end of the house looking like its holding up the over lapping roof?

[Spark910]

hmm.. Use Alt+2 I like to see the whole level! =(
Its nice and spacious and good, but nothing not seen before,

[Waltz5]

The house looks pretty ugly, with that castle tiles as the roof with the house. Otherwise, nothing special, but the detailing saved you on this one. But people's attention goes to the house, which I think must change in some way. Also, center your lamp on the post.

Rating: 4/10

[AlexH]

I din't like the way you used the 2 different sand to grass tiles.
They can be nice if used right.
You just haven't used them right.

[Spark910]

There was a time ( month ago) when this level would have got higher rating but now it ahsnt as alot of good levels have been posted recently.

[kenyonandelliot]

I do not like how the lamp was put and the roof of your house. Everything looks great and the the details you have. You should fix somethings but it looks good so far.

Rating = 7/10

[RTelvecho]

looks too plain

[Genesis]

thanks guy for the comments im still learning and have a long way to go ^_^

[Genesis]

here is the level again i changed the house

[kenyonandelliot]

The house is better. But there is still somethings you forgot to add in my other post so...

Rating = 8.5/10

Getting better at level maker.

[draygin]

First off for the lights on the beach you might give it a haze effect by using setzoomeffect number; example setzoomeffect 9; Also depending on how that looks lightening or darkening.

My second thing is there are a few spots on the sand where there are big patches of the same tile you might try filling it in a little bit with other tiles so it doesnt look like a big empty patch.

Everything else I think has been pointed out.

addon second house looks much nicer. Might consider a chimeny with smokani.mng or smokeani.gif and use seteffect to make it lighter and look like smoke

[syltburk]

O_o rating:5/10

[Spark910]

Ok then you shouldn't have used alt+2! You have show bad detailing on the top of the level, If I had rated you theres a chance it would have gone down

[CheeToS2]

looks strange with all 3 of those water land things all parallel to each other :x