outside level

Timpan3 · #1 08-18-2002, 06:43 PM

I think this is quite good for a newbie

nyghtGT · #2 08-18-2002, 06:56 PM

Could be better.

Good start though.

Timpan3 · #3 08-18-2002, 08:16 PM

What do you think could be better ?

Falcor · #4 08-18-2002, 08:34 PM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
What do you think could be better ?

Perhaps because the terrain has no divercity, because the path is too straight and ridgid, fence are just posts and no acual fencing in it. stuff like that.

Cid_Night · #5 08-18-2002, 11:29 PM

its pretty good, i kinda like the path, its colorful...ummm...
Always remember the 5 points of level editing
detail
detail
detail
detail
and most importantly
detail

Stanrar2k2 · #6 08-18-2002, 11:43 PM

xXShakakuXx:

Cid_Night, I think you forgot to mention detail!!

Anyway, it's pretyt good for starting off. Try to include more grass detail, and try to use predefined objects as little as possible.

RavenTelvecho · #7 08-19-2002, 03:11 AM

detail! and yes its pretty good for a newbie ^_^

TLG_WL_mechman · #8 08-19-2002, 08:59 AM

Back in when Graal was young, (and by that I'm talking bout the versions before graal 2001) There were servers with levels of the quality, so, yes, its a very good level

Timpan3 · #9 08-19-2002, 07:56 PM

aww just admit it you all love me

Glory · #10 08-19-2002, 08:09 PM

i love you

marry me.

Timpan3 · #11 08-19-2002, 10:35 PM

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Originally posted by Glory
i love you

marry me.

OMG I WILL WERE MARRIED NOW. WANNA F*** ?

The Darkest Evil · #12 08-20-2002, 09:07 AM

Insanity Lord
well for starting off it was much better than my first level

but it could use more grass detailing, and try to explore the tiles

DonTonberry · #13 08-20-2002, 10:17 AM

1- The paths are out-dated. Use curvy dirt paths.
2 - Grass detaling is bad. A lot more detailing is needed, and don't use those brown tile things. They are ugly.
3- Those fences are just..ugly.
4- Blend the trees together.

If you fix all that stuff it should be half decent.

Legondary_MyTH · #14 08-20-2002, 10:30 AM

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Originally posted by DonTonberry
1- The paths are out-dated. Use curvy dirt paths.
2 - Grass detaling is bad. A lot more detailing is needed, and don't use those brown tile things. They are ugly.
3- Those fences are just..ugly.
4- Blend the trees together.

If you fix all that stuff it should be half decent.

Umm thats a first lvl i think he needs to wrok on the detail first..

DonTonberry · #15 08-20-2002, 11:21 AM

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Originally posted by Legondary_MyTH

Umm thats a first lvl i think he needs to wrok on the detail first..

First level or not, He can use all the advice he can get. Even if it he doesn't use it now, he can use it as he progesses.

nikoma5000 · #16 08-28-2002, 07:07 PM

it's a nice level. My opinion: 4/10

Spark910 · #17 08-31-2002, 06:00 PM

Better than my first level! =)

osrs · #18 09-07-2002, 12:52 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
I think this is quite good for a newbie

The level design is empty.
You need make your level be nice,lights are a very good thing to do that.
Keep working..