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Old 03-26-2002, 06:59 AM
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Mystia

My friend Jman9912 gave me his playerworld to review to see if it had the ability to be put online and here is the review. PLZ NOTE I AM NOT A MEMBER OF THE PLAYERWORLD MANAGEMENT TEAM AND I AM JUST DOING THIS FOR PURE FUN. This review is not meant to bad the playerworld or to compliment it . It is just honest truth



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Mystia Review


The intro was nice. The stars have alot of symbolic resemblance to the name Mystia. The only
problem with the intro was the fact that it was laggy even when it was offline which is not a
good sign considering i have a decent computer.

TILES

I walk outside the first thing I noticed is that the Houses have ALOT of ORIGINALITY which
is a great thing to have now adays in Playerworlds. It is becoming harder and harder to create
original content.

The effort in the levels is obviously shown in this Playerworld BUT there is just
barely not enough detail. There will be spots of blank grass in levels that have detail in other
places.

Overall the Tiling was not the worst but it was certainly not the best.

CONTENT

Sadly, There is absolutely nothing to do in this playerworld. The only thing i did was walk
around the levels that were detailed and there is no way to get to other islands yet which is
a bad sign because you can not use alt+5 to warp around if the playerworld was to ever go online.

I did however see some houses and a cave/dungeon? where quest and jobs will be added which is
good to know. The jobs however should not be Constant Button Mashing of the D key. This is some
Advice to the owners.

BUGS

okay. When i go to this cave spot with bars over it , i get sucked in and I get caught. Is this
meant to be a jail ????

In the intro the pictures of the 2 owners are so close together you cannot see their names but I
was barely able to make them out It is highly recommended to fix this problem.

It is also wise to fix the tile errors such as the bridge in the water that has grass on the edge
and the grass that is out in the ocean... I did not know it could be there. --'

GRAPHICS

The graphics that were there were pretty good so that is always a plus but there needs to be some
more to add a better feel to the Playerworld.

There was also a sample picture of their new pics1 which looked very nice and I am hoping to be
able to see more when its finished.

THE OVERALL REVIEW

Sadly this Playerworld does not have nearly enough content to make it online and the level count
is not met yet.

This playerworld has promise but alot must be done to improve it . Such things will be as
adding original quest and jobs without button mashing along with some teamwork items.


IF I WAS A OFFICIAL PLAYERWORLD REVIEWER THIS PLAYERWORLD WOULD BE

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*edit* Failed was made Red so this would strike fear into Jman9912's Soul
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Old 03-26-2002, 07:05 AM
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Any server made by Jman9912 should be banned, he stole a lot of levels from some Ze, oh, whatever in the hell it was, I know he stole it. DTJS=Don't Trust Jerry Sexton
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Old 03-26-2002, 07:15 AM
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That playerworld review is so uncool.

Simply because, you forgot the big threatening red font that says

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Old 03-26-2002, 07:20 AM
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lol im not a official reviewer i am not privledged enough to use that :P
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Old 03-26-2002, 08:29 AM
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I TOLD U THAT WASNT EVERYTHING AND IT WASNT READY FOR A REVIEW LIKE THIS, I DIDNT PUT THE INSIDE LVLS OR NETHING U SAID THAT SOME OF THE OUTSIDE LVLS NEEDED A LIL MORE DETAIL AND IF I SENT IT TO U, U WOULD TELL ME THE BEST WAY TO FIX, I DIDNT SEND U EVERYTHING AND THE BAR THING IS SOMETHING ELSE NOT FINISHED I THOUGHT I COULD TRUST U, WE USED TO BE FRIENDS AND T3CK STFU U JUST IMED ME ON AIM YESTERDAY TO JOIN AND I TOLD U NO CUZ U SUCK
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Old 03-26-2002, 08:37 AM
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Well Mystia is great for a start. I just review Harsh. Im sorry if you all thought Mystia was finished... it was just a review to see how it is in its current state. Sorry for any troubles.
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Old 03-26-2002, 09:14 AM
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We need a team that inspects playerworlds in the making if they wish to enroll onto the list. Every 2 months or so just ask to look and have permission. That would rock but it would give others content info which is wrong so my idea is certainly not a good one.
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