Graal 2230 Story Teaser

ZanderX · #1 01-22-2002, 08:42 AM

this is a release candidate(teaser/trailer, whatever you want to call it) of the story for the upcoming server, graal 2230

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GRAAL 2230
Life, Longevity, Liberty

Chapter 1 : Genesis

For countless generations, we had lived amongst the stars. When our ancestors first achieved space travel in the year 1998, we knew that we were destined for great things. We were wrong; dead wrong. Beginning with the development of our first phase-space reactors in 2043, our technology expanded rapidly as we expanded further and further. Soon, we came to the magnetic edge of the solar system…and we halted. We were not sure whether we should go on or not; were we ready? For decades, our society had built it self up to this.

disclaimer: I, Kamuii, wrote this. I posted it in PW and in Main under direct orders. Have a nice day!

Lash · #2 01-22-2002, 08:48 AM

*yawn* you almost teased me, son.

Lash · #3 01-22-2002, 08:49 AM

or girl...I can't tell.

Sir_Gareth · #4 01-22-2002, 08:53 AM

I was watching the conspericy zone and they were toaling about a cover up about a boat they liek covered in copper and put liek a megnetic feild around it to try to make iinvisible, and it made it invisible than the boat traveled foward into time into like 1988 (this was in 1936) or something, than it traveled back in time than went to normal time only like 2 survivors ehre alive and liek everone was stuck in the walls and stuff, and the FBI is trying to keep it under wraps and there testing stuff liek that today they said..it was weird and remded me of that

MrSmiles · #5 01-22-2002, 08:54 AM

bit lame i thought

sowwy

ZanderX · #6 01-22-2002, 08:55 AM

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Originally posted by MrSmiles
bit lame i thought

sowwy

That is only 1/5 of the first chapter, and there are five more chapters, not to mention a glossary and appendix.

Like I said, this was released so that some people, mainly the ones who are very interested in 2230, would have their interest piqued until the full story is eventually released to the public(after fine tuning and review by the full 2230 staff, of course.)

MrSmiles · #7 01-22-2002, 08:57 AM

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Originally posted by ZanderX

That is only 1/5 of the first chapter, and there are five more chapters, not to mention a glossary and appendix.

Like I said, this was released so that some people, mainly the ones who are very interested in 2230, would have their interest piqued until the full story is eventually released to the public(after fine tuning and review by the full 2230 staff, of course.)

aaahhh i see...

yoshee15 · #8 01-22-2002, 10:34 AM

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Originally posted by ZanderX
this is a release candidate(teaser/trailer, whatever you want to call it) of the story for the upcoming server, graal 2230

disclaimer: I, Kamuii, wrote this. I posted it in PW and in Main under direct orders. Have a nice day!

sounds like a decent introduction to me

ZanderX · #9 01-22-2002, 10:41 AM

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Originally posted by yoshee15

sounds like a decent introduction to me

That's not an introduction. -_-

yoshee15 · #10 01-22-2002, 11:06 AM

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Originally posted by ZanderX

That's not an introduction. -_-

seems like thats how the story begins to me, and I call that an intro

cross_hair · #11 01-22-2002, 02:45 PM

hey! maybe you should write a book instead of making a server
you could turn out to be like J rowling or JR Tolkien and be big pimpin

ZanderX · #12 01-22-2002, 10:52 PM

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Originally posted by cross_hair
hey! maybe you should write a book instead of making a server
you could turn out to be like J rowling or JR Tolkien and be big pimpin

I'm already doing that. -___-

grim_squeaker_x · #13 01-22-2002, 10:55 PM

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Originally posted by cross_hair
you could turn out to be like J rowling or JR Tolkien and be big pimpin

Some would consider that first name an insult ;P

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Anyway, sounds nice enough, though this is a bit too short to give a real opinion about it.

ZanderX · #14 01-22-2002, 11:04 PM

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Originally posted by grim_squeaker_x
Some would consider that first name an insult ;P

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Anyway, sounds nice enough, though this is a bit too short to give a real opinion about it.

I'm gonna try and haggle one paragraph a week out of Birdbird.

psichill · #15 01-22-2002, 11:07 PM

The server is just an RP build thing. (Sum of it in newbie terms)

But it's way more comlicated

psichill · #16 01-22-2002, 11:09 PM

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Originally posted by ZanderX

I'm gonna try and haggle one paragraph a week out of Birdbird.

He hasn't told you anything and you know him in real life?
Do you know how there going to set it up and everything?
Because if you want to know anything that you are kind of scepticle about them just PM me.

ZanderX · #17 01-23-2002, 01:37 AM

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Originally posted by psichill

He hasn't told you anything and you know him in real life?
Do you know how there going to set it up and everything?
Because if you want to know anything that you are kind of scepticle about them just PM me.

I know an assload about 2230 itself.

I am writing the story, Ramsey.

I'm not getting anything from Birdbird.

I am trying to get it so I can post a paragraph a week.