What do you think? (2)

Torankusu · #1 12-18-2001, 05:00 AM

I worked on this for a day or so. :I
The bottom is pretty boring, and I think I got a little carried away with the wave tile.

Tell me what you think.

yoshee15 · #2 12-18-2001, 05:03 AM

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Originally posted by Torankusu
I worked on this for a day or so. :I
The bottom is pretty boring, and I think I got a little carried away with the wave tile.

Tell me what you think.

I like the house, the rest is really bland though.... too straight, use more tiles.

BARGAD · #3 12-18-2001, 05:07 AM

Very nice house ^_^

Exept... it looks kinda stange how it is connected to the water

But... nice house...

/Gori

Qwert616 · #4 12-18-2001, 05:35 AM

Cool.

The river on the top is too straight, and the coast at the bottom is a little bland.

I like the house though. I keep thinking it would look better with a little dock out front though. Eh, I'm not sure how it would look with that though.

Torankusu · #5 12-18-2001, 05:48 AM

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Originally posted by Qwert616
Cool.

The river on the top is too straight, and the coast at the bottom is a little bland.

I like the house though. I keep thinking it would look better with a little dock out front though. Eh, I'm not sure how it would look with that though.

The river/waterfall thing?

I'll try it with a dock.

Qwert616 · #6 12-18-2001, 06:55 AM

The water fall is fine, but the river wavy tiles are straight.

WoRlaNN2k · #7 12-18-2001, 08:53 AM

Looks nice... but how do you enter the house withought getting wet?

Torankusu · #8 12-18-2001, 09:07 AM

I added a dock.

http://rick.*******ers.net/ss/users/...oran-house.png

Qwert616 · #9 12-18-2001, 09:16 AM

Yeah, I think I like the dock better. It gives the house more of a balance...I think its something like that.

Kumada · #10 12-18-2001, 09:39 AM

add something on the bottem of the house like. a dock or ground

yoshee15 · #11 12-18-2001, 11:28 PM

i liked it better without the dock =\ it was original before, lookked cool, now it looks like a house placed onto water tiles

mastervampire · #12 12-19-2001, 04:38 AM

pretty spiffy, but maybe make the dock attach to dry ground?

Torankusu · #13 12-19-2001, 06:56 AM

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Originally posted by yoshee15
i liked it better without the dock =\ it was original before, lookked cool, now it looks like a house placed onto water tiles

Uhm... that's all it was before...

a house placed onto water tiles with nothing holding it up...

yoshee15 · #14 12-19-2001, 11:02 AM

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Originally posted by Torankusu
Uhm... that's all it was before...

a house placed onto water tiles with nothing holding it up...

before like the poles staright into the water, like they were supporting it. Now it looks like you built a house on a dock and through it in the water

Qwert616 · #15 12-19-2001, 11:06 AM

Mabye put smaller poles at the bottom of the dock?

Anyway the way it was before, I know the poles were supposed to look like they were going into the water, but it just didn't look right.

Torankusu · #16 12-19-2001, 11:21 AM

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Originally posted by yoshee15

before like the poles staright into the water, like they were supporting it. Now it looks like you built a house on a dock and through it in the water

Those "poles" (the wooden ones) were only supporting the thing that was supposed to be overhanging the house/the 2nd deck on top.

The things right beneath the house were just a smaller "dock-like" thing that was supposed to be under the house supporting it...

This way I just expanded it ?

Qwert616 · #17 12-19-2001, 11:25 AM

Oh, ok I get it now

Slaktmaster · #18 12-19-2001, 02:19 PM

i think its too purple

aesquivel · #19 12-19-2001, 09:43 PM

it okay....... errrm mybe......

zeroangel · #20 12-20-2001, 01:37 AM

Add More Detail

if u worked 1 day on it u must be really bad

LittleBiiru · #21 12-21-2001, 12:28 PM

But that sucks.. Lol.. You could have added more detial in just about everything..

Torankusu · #22 12-22-2001, 08:47 AM

OKAY. HERE yOU GO YOU PICk YMTOEHR F[-]k312s

By the way, I am not done. Keep your unconstructive criticism to yourself.

royce · #23 12-22-2001, 10:14 AM

fairly good....but also use some chopped bushes instead of all bushes.....use some root things and that other thing that looks almost the same. a little tree would look good. table to the right needs to be done over again or make a gfx out of it. bottom needs to be more detailed. try rounding off the dock around the house instead of extending straight up. hmm i cant remember the rest.....

Torankusu · #24 12-22-2001, 10:25 AM

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Originally posted by royce
fairly good....but also use some chopped bushes instead of all bushes.....use some root things and that other thing that looks almost the same. a little tree would look good. table to the right needs to be done over again or make a gfx out of it. bottom needs to be more detailed. try rounding off the dock around the house instead of extending straight up. hmm i cant remember the rest.....

The rounded off dock, and cut off bushes are in the new level already. What do you mean the table to the right? What's wrong with it?

royce · #25 12-22-2001, 11:09 AM

big tile error in table.....looks ugly man. if it took you a day to do that then your slow lol...really slow.

Torankusu · #26 12-22-2001, 11:22 AM

Check the screenshot.

I guess I am slow if you don't consider the fact that I only worked on it about forty-five mintes, if not shorter, before I had to read my book and write my research papers.

Kumada · #27 12-22-2001, 12:12 PM

Post the level ill make it better and send back

Torankusu · #28 12-22-2001, 12:18 PM

hell no...

Kumada · #29 12-22-2001, 12:57 PM

fien =\
I was just going to fix a few things but i guess u dont want any help :o

aesquivel · #30 12-22-2001, 01:05 PM

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Originally posted by Torankusu
hell no...

oaky Torankusu your a retard jsu post it kumada is awesome at making lvs and as i can see your well NOT and need some help with the lv

Torankusu · #31 12-22-2001, 02:02 PM

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Originally posted by aesquivel

oaky Torankusu your a retard jsu post it kumada is awesome at making lvs and as i can see your well NOT and need some help with the lv

This is not constructive criticism, dipshit.

For one, I don't care about being referred to as a retard by someone that completely ****ed up on their grammar and punctuation, and probably has the IQ of a dead panda.

Second, I am not going to give him my level to edit simply because it would then not be my level. It would've been my level just editted by kumada.

aesquivel · #32 12-22-2001, 02:05 PM

well then all you would have done was edit it and take out what ever and make it better its not like its taht much werk also if uidnt like it the dont use it jsu change it

also my IQ is 151 get it right

Torankusu · #33 12-22-2001, 02:07 PM

Ugh. I can't understand a damn thing you are trying to type out.

aesquivel · #34 12-22-2001, 02:09 PM

dont worry about it i was in a hurry so jus forget it

Torankusu · #35 12-22-2001, 02:15 PM

, . ; ?
are really great keys and punctuation marks.
USE THEM.

ArchOwl · #36 12-22-2001, 02:17 PM

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Originally posted by Torankusu

constructive criticism

is what the graal communication center lacks by most people

anyways,i like your level

Torankusu · #37 12-22-2001, 02:18 PM

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Originally posted by ArchOwl
anyways,i like your level

THAT IS NOT CONSTUSCRTIVE

aesquivel · #38 12-22-2001, 02:21 PM

what is teh use of putting the ,.;? i can read every thing jus fine with out them all they do is take up space

ArchOwl · #39 12-22-2001, 02:24 PM

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Originally posted by Torankusu
THAT IS NOT CONSTUSCRTIVE

because i like it and i dont see how you can improve it,its already fine

Torankusu · #40 12-22-2001, 02:26 PM

?!?

The USE OF THOSE KEYS IS TO INDICATE PAUSE (,) QUESTION (?) END OF SENTENCE (.).
Without them, your typing looks like ****, basically, and is hard to read.