started a project

bahamutstevetff · #1 10-30-2008, 10:08 PM

im still making this, its not an xmas weapon im just practicing, would like some feedback

, im yet to make any other views.

Nefir · #2 10-30-2008, 11:06 PM

Hmmm, not bad at all. First, try making a darker shade for zone, light's good, but dark fits it better. Second, make the handle a little "fater". Add some details, just add some random things here and there, and you might find it better. Add some other colors than just gray too. Finally, the barrel looks weird, try something else. Other wise, that's a good start.

bahamutstevetff · #3 10-30-2008, 11:32 PM

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Originally Posted by Nefir

Hmmm, not bad at all. First, try making a darker shade for zone, light's good, but dark fits it better. Second, make the handle a little "fater". Add some details, just add some random things here and there, and you might find it better. Add some other colors than just gray too. Finally, the barrel looks weird, try something else. Other wise, that's a good start.

thanks, ill try and take these suggestions onboard tommorow when i get back on big computer tommorow.

Huwajux · #4 10-31-2008, 12:42 AM

This should be moved to the Graphics section of the forums. This is not a submission.

pooper200000 · #5 10-31-2008, 03:18 AM

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Originally Posted by Huwajux

This should be moved to the Graphics section of the forums. This is not a submission.

Right. Moved.

bahamutstevetff · #6 10-31-2008, 11:51 AM

edited it, much darker,. not animated yet but i will do soon, also going top make more veiws.

Soala · #7 10-31-2008, 04:39 PM

try a little shading for the laser, not only a straight red line

natchez416 · #8 10-31-2008, 07:17 PM

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Hmmm, not bad at all.

People like you make me sick, and there's lots of em here.

Baha: That thing you made is completely horrible, That's the straight truth.
Suggestion: I suggest re-doing your whole outline. Most of all work on making it less square and boxy. Try and make it more intricate too.

Nightmare · #9 11-01-2008, 11:41 PM

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Originally Posted by natchez416

People like you make me sick, and there's lots of em here.

Baha: That thing you made is completely horrible, That's the straight truth.
Suggestion: I suggest re-doing your whole outline. Most of all work on making it less square and boxy. Try and make it more intricate too.

excuse me? i will stick woodchips under your fingernails. dont insult his work like that. suggestions are ok, but no insults.

Huwajux · #10 11-04-2008, 09:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Nightmare

excuse me? i will stick woodchips under your fingernails. dont insult his work like that. suggestions are ok, but no insults.

Sometimes to instill some sort of motivation into an 'artist', you need to say the truth without holding back. If you tell him "Oh, well it's ok but it could use some work on the shading around the top", then he's just going to do a half-assed job on the shading and then see it as a piece of work worthy of Zone.

Of course, purely insulting it isn't going to work. You have to give him some suggestions too, which is what natchez did.

knightfire35 · #11 11-05-2008, 03:10 AM

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Originally Posted by natchez416

People like you make me sick, and there's lots of em here.

Baha: That thing you made is completely horrible, That's the straight truth.
Suggestion: I suggest re-doing your whole outline. Most of all work on making it less square and boxy. Try and make it more intricate too.

Wow, calm down. He was asking for suggestions not insults.
I for one, think it's pretty good.