A new body.

Sage_Shadowbane · #1 04-27-2007, 10:48 PM

Well heres a body I just finished.. did for a friend, first one i've done in awhile and looking back at the first body I posted on the forums, i'm rather happy with how much i've improved.

Everyone is welcome to give c & c, I'd be happy to fix any problems you see on the body. Thanks

Infernix · #2 04-27-2007, 10:54 PM

I kinda like it the way it is and wouldnt change a thing. Would look pretty good if animated right.

MrAnonymous_P2P · #3 04-28-2007, 01:47 AM

Kinda boxy.

smirt362 · #4 04-28-2007, 02:05 AM

His skin looks kinda splotchy O.o

Infernix · #5 04-28-2007, 02:31 AM

Id put some clothes and stuff on him and it would look pretty damn good.

elite_master · #6 04-28-2007, 02:59 AM

Shadow looks extremely akward..

Along with that, where is his mouth!?

Other then that, it's an okay graphic.

Gambet · #7 04-28-2007, 03:41 AM

Talk about steroids...

elite_master · #8 04-28-2007, 03:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Gambet

Talk about steroids...

Heeez AAAAHHHNOOOLLLLDDD

He be back.

Zideruic · #9 04-28-2007, 04:11 AM

He needs to be taller in order to be AAAHNNNOLD... add some black hair and you've got steven segal though.

Crow · #10 04-28-2007, 11:00 AM

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Originally Posted by Sage_Shadowbane

I'd be happy to fix any problems you see on the body.

Detail. It looks horrible, really. Looks like someone burned him down.

Shadow. That shadow...looks kinda weird. Prolly because you added a shadow for the hands.

Contrast. You really have to up the contrast, so you can actually see the details.

xXziroXx · #11 04-28-2007, 11:44 AM

Looks kinda like Danny DeVito xD

Stephen · #12 04-28-2007, 12:46 PM

The highlights are too strong; they look more like blisters or bed sores.

ff7chocoboknight · #13 04-29-2007, 02:40 AM

good job lighten his skin and then u have "even better job"

DustyPorViva · #14 04-29-2007, 03:11 AM

I think there's too much going on in too little of a space.
I suggest toning down all the noise and stuff you're trying to cram in there.

ff7chocoboknight · #15 04-29-2007, 03:24 AM

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Originally Posted by DustyPorViva

I think there's too much going on in too little of a space.
I suggest toning down all the noise and stuff you're trying to cram in there.

Wha...?

DustyPorViva · #16 04-29-2007, 03:49 AM

He has a small sprite, and trying to cram in a lot of detail in there.
When you're doing sprites, the main thing you want to focus on is clarity. Sometimes you need to sacrifice the details of the sprite to make it overall more clear to the player. His sprite is not clear at all, he has muscles everywhere, or at least have emphasized them beyond the need. I think he needs to be a little more subtle with his muscle shading, and like Stephen said, drop the highlights. That way people know the muscles are there, but the fact that they are isn't the main attraction.

ff7chocoboknight · #17 04-29-2007, 03:51 AM

oh i understand now u said something about noise so i got confused

Kirble · #18 04-29-2007, 02:28 PM

I'd say that the body itself is starting to look like that rock guy out of the fantastic four, just on a smaller scale xD

Chompy · #19 04-29-2007, 03:25 PM

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Originally Posted by Kirble

I'd say that the body itself is starting to look like that rock guy out of the fantastic four, just on a smaller scale xD

lol

But I agree you could sacrifice some detail to make it clearer as Dusty said :o

ff7chocoboknight · #20 04-29-2007, 04:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Kirble

I'd say that the body itself is starting to look like that rock guy out of the fantastic four, just on a smaller scale xD

lol

Sage_Shadowbane · #21 04-29-2007, 08:41 PM

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Originally Posted by Crow

Detail. It looks horrible, really. Looks like someone burned him down.

Shadow. That shadow...looks kinda weird. Prolly because you added a shadow for the hands.

Contrast. You really have to up the contrast, so you can actually see the details.

Crow you seriously dont even deserve to be on these graphic forums, SERIOUSLY! Your sitting here nit picking at the thing, and instead of giving constructive crits, your just telling me what you dont like and not how to fix it. Than all you can say is "up the contrast". Seriously I thought you were a scripter... you should seriously stick to that.

Anyways, Dusty, thanks for the advice, Ill try to fix it up asap.

Crow · #22 04-29-2007, 10:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Sage_Shadowbane

Crow you seriously dont even deserve to be on these graphic forums, SERIOUSLY! Your sitting here nit picking at the thing, and instead of giving constructive crits, your just telling me what you dont like and not how to fix it. Than all you can say is "up the contrast". Seriously I thought you were a scripter... you should seriously stick to that.

Anyways, Dusty, thanks for the advice, Ill try to fix it up asap.

Im a NAT, GAT, LAT and Gani Maker, and a pretty advanced GHer.
You said you are taking crits & comments. Dont say that if you are whining at the end anyways.

Edit: Btw, I am sure you wanna tell me that. Just because I quoted your "would be happy to fix" part doesnt mean I have to tell you how to fix your stuff. This is not my gfx, you know?

Sage_Shadowbane · #23 04-30-2007, 11:49 PM

Just because its not your GFX, doesnt mean you cant tell me what you think should be fixed, your just saying "Oh I dont like that, and Oh btw, that is hideous.". You should try something like "Hey, thats not too bad, but you should seriously try to work on this or that more.". I mean seriously, how hard is it to comment someone in a respectable manor?

Crow · #24 04-30-2007, 11:51 PM

Whats so hard with "up the contrast"? Do you want me to tell you how to modify every single pixel of your damn body? True, I didnt really say how to fix that detail issue, but thats because I am not sure myself.