My Outside Level

[ArushenP2P]

Here is my outside level. Hope you like

http://img443.imageshack.us/img443/5...elevel1uq7.png

[foxboi]

Pretty good

[DARKVILLIN]

grass tile errors

[Crow]

Originally Posted by DARKVILLIN

grass tile errors

You forgot the other ones, like the bush in the tree, the cliffs, the higher grass etc, etc.

[DARKVILLIN]

I have somtach flu...im a little out of it lol. yeah um fix the bush in the tree at least lol

[maximus_asinus]

Originally Posted by Crow

You forgot the other ones, like the bush in the tree, the cliffs, the higher grass etc, etc.

I don't see a bush in a tree, unless you're referring to the bush UNDER the tree (which makes sense, because of Graal's perspective).

Everything else I agree with.

[DARKVILLIN]

bush in tree is near left center

[hampy]

I like it overall, the grall tile error is pretty minimal although I do see a few cliff errors. Apart from that its good Nice job

[Ducati_Link]

The detail doesn't seem to flow. You need to end you grass/grass areas too.. even if they lead to no where, make 3 corners go into each other.
Just to many errors within the detailing. Nice try, but I would suggest starting again with it. Maybe add a slight path and work around that... patch some grass together, then patches of swamp, with some flowers.. 1 or 2 rocks max.. and make little groups of bushes, not just 1 here and 1 there.. seems to work better.