Snake Head[WIP]

Sage_Shadowbane · #1 10-06-2006, 05:29 PM

Heres one of my WIP's...I still have to fix a few flaws in the shading and lineart. Some lines are too straight, and I still need to add some AAing

Chompy · #2 10-06-2006, 05:34 PM

wow, thats really nice, I like the shading but it is something with the eyes...

xXziroXx · #3 10-06-2006, 05:35 PM

Theres something about it that I dont like.. hmm.. cant put my finger on it.

Tom · #4 10-06-2006, 05:35 PM

Look at the eyes for a while, they are actually hypnotic lol

Nice work dude, your improving fast

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Originally Posted by xXziroXx

Theres something about it that I dont like.. hmm.. cant put my finger on it.

You probably dislike the eyes because hes used green on a green background so they blend to much, and strain the eyes ^_^

Id suggest a different colour on the eyes?

xXziroXx · #5 10-06-2006, 05:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tom

Look at the eyes for a while, they are actually hypnotic lol

Nice work dude, your improving fast

You say that to everyone, dont you D:

Tom · #6 10-06-2006, 05:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx

You say that to everyone, dont you D:

Only to the ones that actually do improve

And also the ones who take advise and deserve a good comment :P

Chompy · #7 10-06-2006, 05:41 PM

ah, and the mouth looks like if the snake close the mouth it would cover the nose (or what is it on snakes?)
big mouth

xXziroXx · #8 10-06-2006, 05:42 PM

I think I know what it is I dont like, the *bumps* on it are too bright comparing to the normal skin, atleast in my oppinion.

Zero Hour · #9 10-06-2006, 05:43 PM

The contrast between the tan and the green flecks on the snake's head are a bit distracting.

Tom · #10 10-06-2006, 05:46 PM

I also think between the eyes it should be darker, as it looks like the light is coming from the top, it would look like its slopping down instead of being flat.

Goboom · #11 10-06-2006, 06:13 PM

The tounge and mouth need some adjustments, and the red in the eyes is to bright. Other than that it looks pretty good!

xAndrewx · #12 10-06-2006, 06:41 PM

Have you ever seen a snake? :S

Draenin · #13 10-06-2006, 06:44 PM

Way way too curvy. It gives it a very cheesy catoony look, but in the bad way. D:

Em · #14 10-06-2006, 06:57 PM

All the little white dots make it look a bit odd, but it's really rather nice.
I like the cartoony feel.

Crono · #15 10-06-2006, 08:53 PM

tongue needs work, eyes need work

apart from that it looks good

Infernix · #16 10-06-2006, 09:07 PM

I dont like the mouth area.

Demisis_P2P · #17 10-06-2006, 11:45 PM

Try making the eyes yellow :}

Also I think the texture on it's head is too strong. It makes the snake look weird.

Elk · #18 10-06-2006, 11:51 PM

nice texture

Zideruic · #19 10-07-2006, 01:19 AM

Cheeks seem too fat, normally they have a head shaped like a broad arrowhead.

lancelot9 · #20 10-07-2006, 07:43 AM

i think you should stop
drop everything
and make a killer tree, thats what i think woo good work tho its nice