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Old 08-30-2006, 07:28 AM
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Before > After type thing

Well, I am posting an older screenshot of the same level that I remade from my home server.

...Then the remade one.

The house on the right on the new screenshot VIncent Valentine made for me a while ago, I'm still learning how to make cool houses. They're a huge pain in the bum. =[

I might post more re-make type levels in this thread if I want to reveal more. >=]

I wanted your opinions. =]
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Old 08-30-2006, 01:52 PM
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Roads = good!

Houses = ok. I don't like the red one.

Detail = a bit overdone but I like the style. Reminds me of my own a bit.

Overall a decent town level. 6/10
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Old 08-30-2006, 02:08 PM
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You took away way to much from the orignal one :X So, they don't look the same. Still it's a good level aside from the tile errors in the hedge fence around the house (turning parts), detailing a little over done and the houses are not so perty :o

Paths are brilliant though.
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Old 08-30-2006, 04:07 PM
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Why you have UN minimap?
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Old 08-30-2006, 06:29 PM
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Eagle's an LAT on UN. Anyway, very impressive improvement. I love the idea behind it - great job!
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Old 08-30-2006, 06:49 PM
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Oh, XD.
Well, I don't really like it :[.
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Old 08-30-2006, 07:28 PM
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Minus 10 points for working on UN.

For the level, I dislike it. Why would they have laid down a stone path in such a random design? I get it with sand paths, but with stone, it shouldn't happen. Houses look average, and there is some tiling that I just don't get. I give the level a -15/10.
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Old 08-30-2006, 07:32 PM
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I don't work there anymore.
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Old 08-30-2006, 08:02 PM
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2.5/10 says I.
1) It's way over-detailed.
2) The roads are too twisted, what's wrong with straight ones?
3) The blue house is extremely messed up.

I prefer the original.
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Old 08-30-2006, 08:34 PM
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Well, it's a noble effort. The roads are irrational (why would people go to all the trouble of making curvy roads like that?), the houses are too compact, and there are some tile errors.

I give this level a D grade.
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Old 08-30-2006, 11:36 PM
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Well, it's a noble effort. The roads are irrational (why would people go to all the trouble of making curvy roads like that?), the houses are too compact, and there are some tile errors.

I give this level a D grade.
I think he went a little overboard, but maybe he doesnt want every road to look the same? Just to be easy on the eyes or something.
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Old 08-31-2006, 12:02 AM
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I like the roads.
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Old 08-31-2006, 10:54 AM
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I think he went a little overboard, but maybe he doesnt want every road to look the same? Just to be easy on the eyes or something.
If you get a road that's good and efficient, you're going to try to replicate it's success. If the lack of variety is not aesthetically appealing, then simply distract from the road with something outstanding.
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Old 08-31-2006, 06:29 PM
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I was planning to make another town with straight roads. Making every town the same.. well, thats stupid.

Thanks for the comments though.
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Old 09-27-2006, 06:52 AM
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That level is alright besides the houses, good job eagle and i will grade as soon as you eagle up them houses :P.
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Old 09-29-2006, 06:05 AM
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First of all.

The road is horrible.. the house on the left isn't the best at all either.

I do like the house on the right though.
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Old 09-30-2006, 06:40 AM
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First of all.

The road is horrible.. the house on the left isn't the best at all either.

I do like the house on the right though.
I disagree completely. I think the red house is kind of crappy, while the blue one is okay. =[
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Old 09-30-2006, 08:22 AM
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Nothing works with the blue house, it's bad =/
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Old 10-01-2006, 03:44 AM
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the first level looks quite nice
classic style
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Old 10-01-2006, 03:30 PM
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2.5/10 says I.
1) It's way over-detailed.
2) The roads are too twisted, what's wrong with straight ones?
3) The blue house is extremely messed up.

I prefer the original.
You still call it a house?Oo
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Old 10-03-2006, 07:38 AM
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i like the 2nd lvl... the first one seems to be to plain for me...and the roads are sekc
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Old 10-04-2006, 01:48 AM
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i like the 2nd lvl... the first one seems to be to plain for me...and the roads are sekc
Thank you.

The first level was an old level from about 98' or 99 that I sort of remade in the second one.
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Old 10-04-2006, 11:52 AM
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Looking pretty good, Eagle. I thought you didn't have time for Graal anymore? You need to get yer ass back to Delt Dev and get back to work, ho. >:o
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Old 10-04-2006, 12:30 PM
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Looking pretty good, Eagle. I thought you didn't have time for Graal anymore? You need to get yer ass back to Delt Dev and get back to work, ho. >:o
Since Darlene so rudely closed our other thread and impeded our ability to communicate FREELY and RESOLVE the problem I'll ask you here.

What's the image name of the graphic in question? I should be able to remove it.

P.S. Cool level. Love the stuff in it. etc.
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Old 10-05-2006, 03:31 AM
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I would love to come back, but I couldn't be depended on right now.. =[
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