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Old 08-10-2006, 09:05 PM
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Rate my level.

Been a while since I've posted a new level, let alone made one, so here it is! I'd like to thank Vulcan for the house idea.

Please rate from 1-10 and leave some comments.

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Old 08-10-2006, 09:06 PM
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Old 08-10-2006, 09:50 PM
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Woah, very good! I really like it =D

I don't like the house though.

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Woah, very good! I really like it =D

I don't like the house though.

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How should I do the house.
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Old 08-10-2006, 10:25 PM
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I dislike the house and the sand/water border around the southwest waterfall.
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Old 08-10-2006, 10:58 PM
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Can you please post how the house would be improved? My house skills are lacking. :O
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Old 08-10-2006, 11:21 PM
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8/10

If that level is going online and without a gmap, rid of the half grasses on the sides.
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Old 08-11-2006, 12:56 AM
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Ok, I think I fixed the house.

How about now?
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Old 08-11-2006, 02:28 AM
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I think you should of kept the split level house. Perhaps Remove that right most section of house and add a little bit more to the second level of the house on the cliff. Add in an enterance or something and a larger room. This is just a personal preference of mine but where the front of the house meets the side of the house, I think the wood trim facing east and west should meet the trim facing south.

But besides that I really like the level. 8/10
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Old 08-11-2006, 02:34 AM
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I liked the first one a bit better. I think the reason why it may look odd to some is because the left wing of the house looks sort of like a skywalk.
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Old 08-11-2006, 03:45 AM
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Looks good, not liking the path and house that much:/ House is ok tho. 6/10
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Old 08-11-2006, 04:55 AM
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Waterfalls look strange. Other than that, very nice
And I like the first houses a lot. Quite original.
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Old 08-11-2006, 02:49 PM
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Ok what needs to be done until this level is a "OMG THATS AMAZING!!11"?
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Old 08-11-2006, 08:41 PM
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Sorry for double post but here's what the level looked like before I could think of what to do on the right side. Any suggestions?
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Old 08-11-2006, 08:59 PM
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The first house was fine.
It seems logical that the room over the cliff can lead out ONTO the cliff, since there seems to be no other way to get up there
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Old 08-11-2006, 11:51 PM
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i rate it 10 can you go up the waterfall?
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Old 08-13-2006, 10:38 PM
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Old 08-28-2006, 12:37 AM
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You cleaned up the house fairly good, although it still doesn't look like it'd be structurally sound as is. Also, some of the parts of the level don't make sense and there are some tiles that could use fixing.

That beind said, it's done overall adequately and the waterfalls are integrated fairly well. I'd give it a B-
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