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Old 01-20-2006, 06:57 PM
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GK Sword (untemplated)

I had made this during 2nd slot, last day before exams. We had nothing to do, so I got it pixeled up (all painted :] )

So, critism + comments please, all though I would rather not have useless babbles like LOL IT SUX LEERN TOO PIXEL, I am a beginner so yea, go easy.
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Old 01-20-2006, 07:17 PM
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SUXX LERN 2PIZEL

But more seriously, the hilt sucks, just sucks. And the way you "pillow shaded" the edges of the blade it looks more like a stone slab than a sharp sword. Reminds me of those really cool swords the orcs in LOTR used.

I suggest removing the hilt entirely
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Old 01-20-2006, 07:31 PM
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I will see what I can do with this one when I get the time. I get what you were trying to do.
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Old 01-21-2006, 11:34 PM
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The sword seems to change in size from sprite to sprite.
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Old 01-24-2006, 05:13 PM
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hmmm

that red part doesn't do it any favours.. the shape is too complex, the shading does not fit in with the graal style, the colours are too high in saturation also. decrease saturation, blend the shading and remove that strange red add-on part near the hilt. Should be barable too view then
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Old 01-24-2006, 09:09 PM
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I will fiddle with it soon.
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Old 01-24-2006, 10:13 PM
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Smooth out the edges. Also increase the size on some of the sprites. Like Shadowless said, the sword seems to change size from sprite to sprite.
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Old 01-24-2006, 10:33 PM
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Hum... Here's what I was able to do with it.
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Old 01-25-2006, 06:37 AM
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Hum... Here's what I was able to do with it.
No?
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Old 01-25-2006, 07:44 AM
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Hmmn. Evil approaching. Lump of clay or more solid form. It is a dilemma.
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Old 01-25-2006, 04:42 PM
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Finish it to a stone dragon ;)
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Old 01-25-2006, 04:49 PM
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Hum... Here's what I was able to do with it.
Very sekc, only thing that's really 'wrong' with it, is it's missing a few sprites (look at a normal GK sword/weapon, there's like 4 rotates on the blade...the one you did only has 1 rotate )
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Old 01-25-2006, 05:20 PM
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Who says it has to be a GK weapon? And don't quote me on that. It's his idea in the fist place.
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