Rate please

Crono · #1 01-19-2006, 11:58 PM

It's work in progress but I've been busy. I'll post the complete version later so check back

Edit: Finished level attached upon poster's request. -Jordan

Chicken_l33t · #2 01-20-2006, 12:46 AM

Looking good, nice outline. However I hate your dirt paths detailing, and I don't like your shallow water and deep water outline. It's too.. well not to sure, but use some straights in it.

I really like the cliffing, the outline because of it has some potential.

WanDaMan · #3 01-20-2006, 09:09 AM

I really like the level, especially the path at the bottom. So far I'd say 3/10 because it's not finished.

syltburk · #4 01-20-2006, 10:28 AM

what is there to rate?

haunter · #5 01-20-2006, 02:54 PM

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Originally Posted by syltburk

what is there to rate?

I agree; I think I'll wait until you get a bit more done. I did notice that there's a chunk of a tree missing though. Look at the treetops overlapping the path.

xXziroXx · #6 01-20-2006, 03:34 PM

So far, so good.

WanDaMan · #7 01-20-2006, 08:11 PM

A foreshadow!

Tom · #8 01-20-2006, 08:25 PM

Obvious signs of skill

I know your game Gerami!, You post to make me suffer as i must hire you, damn you!
Wan shall also soon come to the dark side!

Huwajux · #9 01-20-2006, 10:05 PM

It's hard to rate something not even finished, but it looks good. Except, I think that the cliff part in the middle area shouldn't stick out like that. Perhaps it will look better when it is done.

petro1212 · #10 01-21-2006, 03:04 PM

Not going to look at the bigger image :P The small preview says enough. 8 out of 10?!?

Anyhow its nice, with detail it will be perfect

Crono · #11 01-22-2006, 01:11 AM

Updated, but not finished

Luda · #12 01-22-2006, 04:35 AM

I spotted a tile error

At the lower bunch of trees in the bottom right corner theres 1 tile missing

syltburk · #13 01-22-2006, 11:31 AM

cant you just post it finished ? Anyways t he level reminds me heavily of something gori or menion leah have made (it just reminds me), it was a very long time ago

Crono · #14 01-22-2006, 02:30 PM

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Originally Posted by syltburk

cant you just post it finished ?

It takes me -ages- to actually finish a level, so I like to post it in progress. Plus people can suggest things if they want -while- im working.

Quote:

I spotted a tile error
At the lower bunch of trees in the bottom right corner theres 1 tile missing

Ah, thanks a lot.

Darklux · #15 01-22-2006, 02:38 PM

I really like the level, though i think old 2k1 tileset is exhausted in general x.x

Codein · #16 01-22-2006, 02:57 PM

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It takes me -ages- to actually finish a level, so I like to post it in progress. Plus people can suggest things if they want -while- im working

Aye, same here. Nice level, Crono

Crono · #17 01-22-2006, 11:12 PM

I think this is finished?

Can someone please edit my first post and replace that image with this one?

haunter · #18 01-23-2006, 02:35 AM

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Originally Posted by Gerami

Can someone please edit my first post and replace that image with this one?

Done.

I still see that chunk of tree missing. Why are those fence posts there? The ones in the southern half of the level.

Crono · #19 01-23-2006, 12:34 PM

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Originally Posted by haunter

I still see that chunk of tree missing. Why are those fence posts there? The ones in the southern half of the level.

Fence is an entrance, forgot to finish it. Tree hopefully fixed.

Darklux · #20 01-23-2006, 01:08 PM

I have to say that i really like the level 8/10 or 9/10
Its the optimum you can out of that current tileset if you ask me.

Tom · #21 01-23-2006, 02:09 PM

I really like that

<3 Same as what Darklux rated it, i especially like the waterfall and stream at the top right.

haunter · #22 01-23-2006, 03:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Tom

I really like that

<3 Same as what Darklux rated it, i especially like the waterfall and stream at the top right.

Hrm... Now that you mention it that's one thing I did not notice... The top of the waterfall is one tile too high.

Mykel · #23 01-23-2006, 03:52 PM

Yeah, it can't get much better than that as far as levels go, which is why you should make a map and let us rate that.

Crono · #24 01-24-2006, 07:41 PM

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Originally Posted by haunter

Hrm... Now that you mention it that's one thing I did not notice... The top of the waterfall is one tile too high.

Waterfall is fixed. Can you post it as the first one if it isnt too much trouble?

haunter · #25 01-24-2006, 08:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami

Waterfall is fixed. Can you post it as the first one if it isnt too much trouble?

The waterfall looks the same... The top pair of tiles should line up with the cliff's edge.

Infernix · #26 01-24-2006, 08:28 PM

Waterfall isnt fixed, and didnt I teach you about detailing dirt? *slaps*
gj 7.5/10

Lance · #27 01-24-2006, 08:30 PM

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Originally Posted by haunter

The waterfall looks the same... The top pair of tiles should line up with the cliff's edge.

He changed the bottom, but not the top.

I agree that the top would look better if it lined up.

Crono · #28 01-25-2006, 08:38 PM

There. Hopefully that's it?

If so can you put this screenie as the first one posted?

D4rKv310c1ty · #29 01-26-2006, 12:36 PM

Nice outside level :] compared to me you'd do alot better. Im not so good with cliffs. Add some more grass detail

erm..
maybe for example.. Tumantra on UN, its pretty deeply detailed so yeah its pretty hot though