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Old 09-28-2005, 01:25 PM
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Old 09-28-2005, 01:53 PM
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Nice level mang, but I don't like how the cliffs match each other :/
The green circle detail things are over used a bit :P, but aside from that it looks good.
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Old 09-28-2005, 04:33 PM
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I think its a little to overdetailed it seems there is something going on in every tile (besides the regular grass) I like the cool design you made with the mountains and river its valuscious
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Old 09-28-2005, 06:16 PM
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The mountain is neat, heh, but the rest is meh. 4.5/10
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Old 09-28-2005, 07:32 PM
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Hmm to me it looks like a pelvis o_O
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Old 09-29-2005, 08:38 AM
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Don't like the symmetry, and there are a few cliff errors I immediately spotted. Otherwise though, good tiling
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Old 09-29-2005, 09:47 AM
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I only noticed the shadow, can you point them out?
(The waterfall is supposed to be like that)
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Old 09-29-2005, 04:30 PM
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The symmetry brings the whole level down.
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Old 09-30-2005, 10:05 AM
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It's ok but it looks like one of those inkt images that they use for mental tests >.>... mmm I see a... chubby rock warrior..

Anyhow the detailing isn't so great I dislike the usage of lots of patches of plain grass. Try to variate a bit. The tile errors, atleast use graphics for them.

I dislike the way you detailed the sand but thats a personal opinion. Ontop of all that you might want to variate with diffrent pieces of grass/dirt borders so that it looks a bit nicer.

Overal: 5/10
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