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Old 02-22-2005, 10:59 PM
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A level

It's been awile since i've played Graal and this was the last level I done, hehe. I had left for about 3-4 months before hand.

Tell me what you think and rate it and what not, thanks.
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Old 02-22-2005, 11:02 PM
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Not bad, I'd give it a 5/10 and I'm a very hard rater. The mountains have tile errors and dont look attractive but the rest looks ok.

I like the default road style you used.
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Old 02-22-2005, 11:20 PM
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Old 02-23-2005, 07:19 AM
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Hm?
It's a Firefox thing. Try the link in Internet Explorer, I had the same problem but it views fine in IE.

It looks nice for a basic level. Nothing special, and the composition is what you'd expect from just an ordinary level, but it's not a bad style. The cliffs are pretty much entirely wrong to my eyes though, not a style I like at all (indeed, cliffs like that is why I refuse to use the level generator for anything), not to mention the errors in the cliffs. Fix those and I'll like it a lot more

I'll give it a 5/10, ignoring the cliff errors as though it's just part of your style
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Old 02-23-2005, 07:33 AM
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Considering the fact that I'm ignoring all tile errors, and considering I could never do better, I'll give it a 7/10. Don't look at me for accurate ratings though.
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Old 02-23-2005, 01:21 PM
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Why would you go through the trouble of hosting this on brinkster, rather than here, or another website? I can't see it. (I know it is because Firefox doesn't like Brinkster, and good too)
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Old 02-23-2005, 04:10 PM
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This stinks i can't see it =(

Well Firefox all teh way!
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Old 02-23-2005, 04:13 PM
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Far too cluttered.
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Old 02-23-2005, 04:43 PM
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copy paste the link firefox users, worked for me.
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Old 02-24-2005, 01:23 AM
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My internet explorer is screwed up so if it opens a new webpage via link or any other way the page that it opens is just blank, so I resorted to opening up in Opera and it said some crap and Firefox got deleted off my computer :X.

I'll have a go at fixing those tile errors on the cliffs.
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Old 02-24-2005, 03:47 AM
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Old 02-24-2005, 08:32 AM
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None of the links work for me

Edit: Now they work

Anyways, it's far to clutterd... If you want help with cliffs IM me, I got your PM so I shall add you t'night.
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Old 02-24-2005, 01:22 PM
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The perspective doesn't make sense since you use the cliffs weirdly for the top-left grass area.
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Old 02-24-2005, 06:50 PM
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Honestly the only things I like about this are the lower left tree and the gray stone tiling

4/10
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Old 02-25-2005, 12:32 AM
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Honestly the only things I like about this are the lower left tree and the gray stone tiling

4/10


Do yah wanna tell me how I can fix this problem?. Save me blindly trying to fix things.
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Old 02-25-2005, 12:47 AM
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Your detail seems to random and cluttered, like you do your dirt/grass lines well, and I suppose the overall setup of the level is decent.

Your detailing is so chaotic though it seems to subtract from the rest of the level.
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Old 02-25-2005, 03:33 PM
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I actually like this level..
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