Critique my eye.

Raelyn · #1 10-11-2004, 03:47 PM

Tell me what you think, I always sucked at faces, so I thought I would work on faces one part at a time.

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bef · #2 10-11-2004, 04:15 PM

needs to be wider through the middle and on the right (thats if its a right eye)

although that does look pretty cool

osrs · #3 10-11-2004, 04:19 PM

Looks nice, try making anime eyes, they are fun.

Raelyn · #4 10-11-2004, 04:27 PM

Adjusted a bit, look any better?

See above for closer comparison.

bef · #5 10-11-2004, 04:44 PM

thats much, much better.

Raelyn · #6 10-11-2004, 04:50 PM

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Originally Posted by bef

thats much, much better.

Thanks, how does this look when they come together?

GoZelda · #7 10-11-2004, 05:48 PM

Nift, although a tad bit unrealistic.

Zero Hour · #8 10-11-2004, 06:46 PM

Nice, but your nose is too small. (but since this is "critique my eye" not "critique my nose"...)

It's good, I like the shine, gives a good eye texture. See the left eye, for example, how on the bottom left instead of rounding like an eye it goes "BLAM I BE A STRAIGHT LINE, YO'"? You should fix that, only thing I can see wrong, though (:

Curt1zzle · #9 10-11-2004, 08:18 PM

Looks nice. I like it. Don't change a thing. Well, maybe a thing. ;o

Scott · #10 10-11-2004, 08:52 PM

Reminds me of Gaara.

Raelyn · #11 10-11-2004, 10:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Zero Hour

Nice, but your nose is too small. (but since this is "critique my eye" not "critique my nose"...)

It's good, I like the shine, gives a good eye texture. See the left eye, for example, how on the bottom left instead of rounding like an eye it goes "BLAM I BE A STRAIGHT LINE, YO'"? You should fix that, only thing I can see wrong, though (:

The nose is just there to give visual representation to the face build.

Ya, I notice that, my mouse is a baznatch sometimes, I'll fix it when I wake up.