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Old 04-10-2005, 09:25 PM
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Rate my attempted showoff level ;)

I wanted to make a showoff level for some future lat applications, but then I got lazy and uploaded it onto an overworld of a server I am attempting to build. If you could, can you rate it for me? Thxya.
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Old 04-10-2005, 10:08 PM
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Terribly undetailed and boring. The sand is too bland, nothing defines it.
I see a bunch of errors in the level and a bunch of poorly chosen tiles on the grass.
5.5 or 6/10

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Old 04-10-2005, 10:16 PM
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Old 04-10-2005, 11:08 PM
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Doesn't really show off much skill at all. Looks like something I would expect running through when going from one town to another.
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Old 04-29-2005, 07:10 PM
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too much dirt path.. use more grass detail and make dirth paths to a minimal. Remember its a small weird shaped path not a carpet.
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Old 04-30-2005, 07:49 PM
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Uggg.. are there no more level makers in Graal?
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Old 04-30-2005, 08:07 PM
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Old 04-30-2005, 08:22 PM
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Old 04-30-2005, 09:48 PM
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Sure there are, and maybe some of the people just beginning will be great level makers one day (If they can get past all the negativity that they recieve, and listen to those who graciously try to help them)
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Old 04-30-2005, 11:17 PM
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Terribly undetailed and boring. The sand is too bland, nothing defines it.
I see a bunch of errors in the level and a bunch of poorly chosen tiles on the grass.
5.5 or 6/10

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What he said, but my rate for your level is, 5. I see you get the idea of how to use dirt paths. Maybe you should try making them more creative.
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Old 05-01-2005, 04:22 AM
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Old 05-01-2005, 07:44 AM
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Scale: 0 - 1
0.1 (so basically 1/10)

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Old 05-01-2005, 11:03 AM
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I think the level could be decent if the sand path was turned into a cross road or something. This leaves you with more grass to detail. Use this area to make something funkeh.
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Old 05-01-2005, 07:12 PM
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Old 05-01-2005, 10:13 PM
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Sure there are, and maybe some of the people just beginning will be great level makers one day (If they can get past all the negativity that they receive, and listen to those who graciously try to help them)
Actually negativity helps. As in my case, Loriel used to say my levels were not good. So I went around servers, looked at what was popular and started tiling. More levels more negativity. I know that not everyone starts off good but now a days it shouldn't be that hard to do good. Back when I start we didn't have some these useful tiles. Infact I remember having to make my own gifs of tiles to use in levels.

Basically what I am saying is try harder.
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Old 05-02-2005, 12:56 AM
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Actually negativity helps. As in my case, Loriel used to say my levels were not good. So I went around servers, looked at what was popular and started tiling. More levels more negativity. I know that not everyone starts off good but now a days it shouldn't be that hard to do good. Back when I start we didn't have some these useful tiles. Infact I remember having to make my own gifs of tiles to use in levels.

Basically what I am saying is try harder.
Aye, that is true. Wan and SnakeAndy used to give me negativity, before they shown me the ropes, and that's why I would never fade the idea of having someone available who is kind enough to show you what's "hip".
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Old 05-02-2005, 12:58 AM
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Err, this super mod is bothering me. She edited like every posts on this thread.

Let other's post negative if they would like. It help's the person who is creating the level on what to make to make it better. :o
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Old 05-02-2005, 01:10 AM
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Err, this super mod is bothering me. She edited like every posts on this thread.

Let other's post negative if they would like. It help's the person who is creating the level on what to make to make it better. :o
She had every right to edit our posts because they were offtopic, and to start with, your post was not constructive at all, it was just shameful to you, your family and your dog/cat.

Now before I stray off topic again:
I actually don't believe saying "It sucks" without reason, I reckon what should be said is how to improve on it. A person cannot make things better just by "It sucks". It seems I'm also contradicted myself, but what I meant to say was that Negative Crititism is good, with reason to back it up.

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Old 05-02-2005, 08:04 PM
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I redid it, I am at school right now, I will post it later tonight.
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