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Originally Posted by natchez416
People like you make me sick, and there's lots of em here.
Baha: That thing you made is completely horrible, That's the straight truth.
Suggestion: I suggest re-doing your whole outline. Most of all work on making it less square and boxy. Try and make it more intricate too.
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Wow, calm down. He was asking for suggestions not insults.
I for one, think it's pretty good.