My level
 

Heres one of my levels.. Just so you know a little how i Level..

I made a simple quick Forest/Vegetation area around a 'pond'..
I raped the swamp grass tiles to bring out the river and pond..

Judge if you want to

Too much detail... But it's still a nice looking level.

Yea thanks, i was trying to get that deep forestry look to it.. I should of set the tone for it better though..

No problem. I also just noticed a small tile error with a rock overlapping the corner of a tree. ^^

I think you should just make a new level. This one isnt really up to par in any situation.

Oh thanks i see it now...

Yea its just a little forest vegetation i thought i should post

i dont think that the 4 leaf clover looking thing should be repeted like that :(
you could make actual bush looking things it would just take a bit more time...

The random little circles of grass tiling look like you just wanted to throw some stuff on there.

Also the straightness of the grass/water tiles is annoying.

Well like i said, i made it in a quick 20-30 minutes..

The level has potential, but there are too many of those grass patches all over the place. Sometimes things like that look best when not overused.

Ok , a few things

First, your avatar, "Official Graal (LAT)." By official, you just work on some ****ty dev server, right? (Hopefully)

Second, as Infernix said, redo the whole level, don't use so many of those clovers.

Looks like you slapped a bunch of grass patches and even know how to connect. Level is poorly shaped and detailed.

stop attacking and give suggestions on how you think the level can be made better

I like what you're trying to do, even tho it might be unintentionally it doesn't look like every average showoff level, good try.

It doesn't look apealing at all, but keep up the creativity and you might become something. By the way, Joker proves that Darwins evolution theory is correct 100%.
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Oh that amused me...

ya lol....before attacking, use common sense..