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Old 05-15-2011, 03:05 AM
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Some (Era) Levels

Well, since multiple people have been posting their Era levels, and receiving some nice feedback... I thought I could improve my levels by putting them out there and getting some comments/ideas from you ruthless villains.

The levels are attached and here's some descriptions!:

The first three are a gang base I made for Scotland Yard... unfortunately the gang was deleted before they could be implemented. They are a Main Level, Heal Room, and Spar Room respectively in that order. I wanted to take a new approach to a gang base without an elevator and keep it simple... the result was these minimal requirement assortment of levels, attached through some staircases/balconies.

The Fourth is a new level for the Unstick Me Gunshop, this came about because I was idling in there for about an hour writing a bunch of long PMs and really learned to hate the level. Thus I made a new one.

The Final would be my submission for the newest Era Application in which you were required to use some specific tiles in your level creation. I don't exactly love the level because I didn't love the tiles that we were required to use, but I liked the challenge.

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Old 05-15-2011, 04:32 AM
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I personally cant stand the vast amounts of grayness in screenshots 1-3 try make them a big smaller or try add some more colour variation into them so there not so boring, repetitive and just plain dull, I would think the 4th screenshot(the gun shop) is sex but you had to place a window in an illogical place. Move that window showing the grass outside to a new place where it would make more sense and I would fall in love with that level any day. As for the last screenshot Im not digging those shapes, there pretty irregular. Overall your levels seem pretty good and it seems like you have the potential era needs its just that you haven't demonstrated you skills well in these screenshots. Please treat this as constructive criticism and not trolling or anything along those lines
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Old 05-15-2011, 05:45 AM
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i like how u got creative with the stairs but if u knew how to gfx u could add a stair case in there umm there nice the forth screen shot with the guns i dont like how theres nothing speical to it like the floor is the same the walls hardly anything ect but i know its a small space
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Old 05-15-2011, 05:47 AM
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does that window in your shop lead to Narnia?
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does that window in your shop lead to narnia?
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Old 05-15-2011, 05:30 PM
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does that window in your shop lead to Narnia?
Maybe with the winter tileset it would.
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Why is the exit right there? I don't quite understand it. ( on the gun level )
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Uh... because that's where the exit is?
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Old 08-02-2011, 06:41 PM
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Think about it... Look at it, than look at the building on Era where it was suppose to be replaced.
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