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Old 05-14-2011, 07:04 PM
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Here is an era level I just created. Please give feedback.

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Old 05-14-2011, 07:08 PM
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I don't get a certain 'vibe' I get from all other era level's, it could just be I'm not use to it, but, its certainly good work.
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Old 05-14-2011, 07:31 PM
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I don't get a certain 'vibe' I get from all other era level's, it could just be I'm not use to it, but, its certainly good work.
I feel the same way but at the same time I kinda like it :3! very nice
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Old 05-14-2011, 07:37 PM
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Too plain for my tastes. but it shows your skill nicely.
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Old 05-14-2011, 07:40 PM
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Too plain for my tastes. but it shows your skill nicely.
Do you wish to see something with more images and no plainness?
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Old 05-14-2011, 08:10 PM
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It's nice, but the level is too "predictable" if I might say. Everything looks too similar.
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Old 05-14-2011, 08:30 PM
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era - level2

Here is another level please leave feedback.
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Old 05-14-2011, 09:21 PM
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I dont like the huge space on the top house. I know the player can walk on it. But, by any suggestion. Maybe you should add barrels or boxes on top.
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Old 05-14-2011, 09:40 PM
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Nice levels, but the style just tortures me..

Reminds me of working with Mesh... I mean I use a similar style sometimes but don't rely on that formation for every building.

All 5 buildings you made just look the same to me; angled corners, symmetrical floors on-top of each other, same doors should obviously be changed around, the windows are placed the same on each one.

Your skill level is on-par but switch up the formation and style; think outside the box.

/agree with Sage's comment.
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Old 05-14-2011, 10:30 PM
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This has the 'vibe' but, the little area in the bottom left should not be there, era dose not have little area's like that every where, and, seem's out of place, besides that, good work!
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I prefer grass lining the edges of the buildings, and then maybe add some bushes and flowers if you've got those
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Old 05-15-2011, 05:41 AM
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on the first level could use more detail on ur grass but try to be more creative with the dirt tiles. and the house on the bottom of first img is too basic and plain. Expect that its a good job like me i try to think of ways to seperate me away from other lats like when i lat i constantly thinking what can make my levels break away from other players ya i can make a good same ol same but in my eyes with the levels team thats what i fell like its lacking is being creative and not bringing something fresh to the level more eye candy then basic
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Old 05-15-2011, 07:30 AM
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I like the first one, has a neighborhood feel for me.
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I like the first one, has a neighborhood feel for me.
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