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Old 11-07-2002, 07:22 PM
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a level i made

Here's a level i made, if anyone is interested in learning me
to make better level (i've read you people need LAT's)

Please write that
Else just rate it
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Old 11-07-2002, 07:41 PM
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sure
1show the hole level
2. dont use npc trees.
3. try using other tiles
4.house tile error
5. to plain

besides that its nothing special with it

rating: 3.5/10

the thing i liked whas how u used grass tiles (that they were sticked together).



oh yes i think u should ad a road to that level
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Old 11-07-2002, 07:44 PM
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sure
1show the hole level
2. dont use npc trees.
3. try using other tiles
4.house tile error

besides that its nothing special with it

rating: 2/10
oh yes i think u should ad a road to that level
1. That's all i made, iam lazy
2. Why not? It makes it look more real
3. ????
4. Where?

What could i add to make it special

rating.........

A road.. its a small house in the woods
No roads needed
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Old 11-07-2002, 07:51 PM
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2.tree npcs lag it up u dont has to use tree npcs to put them on other trees
3.at the tileset ofcorse read at the stickys here.
4.
if u looked u would see it
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Old 11-07-2002, 07:53 PM
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4.. no honestly....... where.....
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Old 11-07-2002, 11:13 PM
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Hmm...

It need more colours in the grass detail other than GREEN... Try using some flowers or something...

The NPC tree is acctually used correctly for once, congratulations.

There are two tile errors on the house, see on the second floor part, those two green specks? there are tiles near the far right of the tileset with black specks instead of green, it will look better with those...

All in all I really like this level so far! Keep working on it.

7/10 (for now )
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Old 11-08-2002, 04:49 PM
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ohh.. i didnt know there was tiles for that, but now that i know it
we can call it a tile error
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Old 11-08-2002, 07:41 PM
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You should add... ummm, FLOWERS?

Well, you also need a reason for the little blocks that seem to be covered by grass. They are usually part of an old path of some kind. But there is no pattern of a path there. ;x

Hmm, you need more weeds and mabey some swamp

And the NPC Trees are fine. They allow you to pass by the tree in the back so it looks more realistic. The Full NPC Tree is useful for making a few trees go together

Raiting: 8/10

Nice level
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Old 11-08-2002, 07:43 PM
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its not the full tree NPC, just the tree top to make it more realistic so you can pass behind the tree but not through the whole tree
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Old 11-09-2002, 09:37 AM
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its not the full tree NPC, just the tree top to make it more realistic so you can pass behind the tree but not through the whole tree
That's what he meant, he was just giving an example of when to use the whole one.

I like the level, it's not overly detailed, just enough. The house is plain and simple, but that's what makes it look good. Just change the bottom left and right tiles on the second floors as stated above and it'll be a lot better.
I wouldn't add swamp tiles, as there is no real water, so it wouldn't be too swampy/marsh like, in fact I'd just keep it as it is besides a the house.

Good job.
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Old 11-09-2002, 10:53 PM
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Old 11-09-2002, 11:55 PM
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Woddy: The Return of the Trees

another woody level..... here it is please rate
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Old 11-10-2002, 12:12 AM
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Do you go out and put bricks around your house and then cover them with grass or something? x.x
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Old 11-10-2002, 12:14 AM
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ofcourse....... dont you?

well i think it looks better that way (in the level)
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Old 11-10-2002, 12:15 AM
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I don't ;-( I'll post an example of what I use them bricks with.
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