Graal Forums  

Go Back   Graal Forums > Development Forums > Graphic Design
FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  #1  
Old 01-27-2010, 04:09 AM
MagikMasterMind MagikMasterMind is offline
!
MagikMasterMind's Avatar
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Canada, Qc
Posts: 699
MagikMasterMind will become famous soon enough
Send a message via MSN to MagikMasterMind
Soldier sent from Heaven

Oranos gave you a Platemail of the Gods to take on those creatures living out there in the dark. Be strong soldier!

Feel free to comment!

In my opinion, it turned out too flashy, but I think I did a very good attempt on the head its-self.

[Edit]
Things I'll work on when I got time:
Face to be fixed (forgot a spot of hair on the right)
Abs armor details to be worked on
Attached Images
 
__________________

Last edited by MagikMasterMind; 01-27-2010 at 06:11 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 01-27-2010, 04:33 PM
Dnegel Dnegel is offline
Rjax Shizibz
Join Date: Jul 2009
Posts: 1,334
Dnegel will become famous soon enough
I like the hair alittle.

But the outline of the armor should be darker than the armor itself.
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 01-27-2010, 05:45 PM
fowlplay4 fowlplay4 is offline
team canada
fowlplay4's Avatar
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: Canada
Posts: 5,200
fowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond reputefowlplay4 has a reputation beyond repute
Looks like it would be out-of-place in an actual game, looks too soft if that makes sense.
__________________
Quote:
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 01-27-2010, 05:46 PM
Liberated Liberated is offline
not doing alot
Liberated's Avatar
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 1,366
Liberated has a spectacular aura about
I don't like the white outline, and i think it needs more contrast, atleast in the face and hair.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tigairius View Post
I promise when I get rich I'll send you an iPhone. I'll send everyone an iPhone.
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 01-27-2010, 07:40 PM
Immolate Immolate is offline
Indigo
Join Date: Dec 2009
Posts: 322
Immolate is on a distinguished road
I think you need to work around a light source when you shade, especially on the armour. At the moment, it looks like some weird inverted pillow shading. The outling isn't bad but you definitely need to work on the shading.
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 01-27-2010, 08:47 PM
Elk Elk is offline
Sr Marketing Strategist
Elk's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Deerland
Posts: 3,829
Elk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant future
Send a message via ICQ to Elk Send a message via AIM to Elk Send a message via MSN to Elk Send a message via Yahoo to Elk
In my opinion, it looks too Atrius like
__________________
iEra IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)
iCla. IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)
iZone IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)




Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 01-27-2010, 08:52 PM
Crono Crono is offline
:pluffy:
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Sweden
Posts: 20,000
Crono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond repute
Quote:
Originally Posted by Elk View Post
In my opinion, it looks too Atrius like
how insulting :I
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 01-27-2010, 09:15 PM
Elk Elk is offline
Sr Marketing Strategist
Elk's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Deerland
Posts: 3,829
Elk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant future
Send a message via ICQ to Elk Send a message via AIM to Elk Send a message via MSN to Elk Send a message via Yahoo to Elk
well is it not true?
__________________
iEra IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)
iCla. IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)
iZone IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)




Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 01-28-2010, 01:54 AM
MagikMasterMind MagikMasterMind is offline
!
MagikMasterMind's Avatar
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Canada, Qc
Posts: 699
MagikMasterMind will become famous soon enough
Send a message via MSN to MagikMasterMind
Rawr

Need to work on contrast a bit more, still.

Name:  AnimAnim.gif
Views: 290
Size:  1.0 KB
__________________

Last edited by MagikMasterMind; 01-28-2010 at 04:59 AM..
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 01-28-2010, 08:20 AM
Demisis_P2P Demisis_P2P is offline
Kanto League Champion
Demisis_P2P's Avatar
Join Date: Jan 2005
Posts: 2,357
Demisis_P2P has much to be proud ofDemisis_P2P has much to be proud ofDemisis_P2P has much to be proud ofDemisis_P2P has much to be proud ofDemisis_P2P has much to be proud ofDemisis_P2P has much to be proud ofDemisis_P2P has much to be proud of
I can't believe nobody has pointed out that this is stolen from Final Fantasy Seven.
It's the main character. Cloyd.
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 01-28-2010, 08:45 AM
Liberated Liberated is offline
not doing alot
Liberated's Avatar
Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 1,366
Liberated has a spectacular aura about
Quote:
Originally Posted by Demisis_P2P View Post
It's the main character. Cloyd.
If that's a typo, ok, i don't think he looks like Cloud tho. But i can see what you mean.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tigairius View Post
I promise when I get rich I'll send you an iPhone. I'll send everyone an iPhone.
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 01-28-2010, 02:07 PM
Soala Soala is offline
Ideas on Fire
Soala's Avatar
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: In my head
Posts: 3,208
Soala is a jewel in the roughSoala is a jewel in the rough
2nd version looks great.

Probably need a little more work on the eyes ? Maybe some white space ?
Full blue eyes looks weird
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 01-28-2010, 02:15 PM
MagikMasterMind MagikMasterMind is offline
!
MagikMasterMind's Avatar
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Canada, Qc
Posts: 699
MagikMasterMind will become famous soon enough
Send a message via MSN to MagikMasterMind
Stolen? I never played final fantasy lol. :P
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 01-28-2010, 02:15 PM
Elk Elk is offline
Sr Marketing Strategist
Elk's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Deerland
Posts: 3,829
Elk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant futureElk has a brilliant future
Send a message via ICQ to Elk Send a message via AIM to Elk Send a message via MSN to Elk Send a message via Yahoo to Elk
More definition, looks like blue and yellow for me.
__________________
iEra IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)
iCla. IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)
iZone IGN: *Elk (Darkshire)




Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 01-28-2010, 02:21 PM
MagikMasterMind MagikMasterMind is offline
!
MagikMasterMind's Avatar
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Canada, Qc
Posts: 699
MagikMasterMind will become famous soon enough
Send a message via MSN to MagikMasterMind
By definition, you mean contrast or better outlines?
__________________
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +2. The time now is 12:44 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
Copyright (C) 1998-2019 Toonslab All Rights Reserved.