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Old 06-12-2011, 11:21 PM
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These are a few months old and I haven't really started on anything new yet so I guess I'll post these and try to improve them a bit more

So any suggestions?

Fixed the soda bottle
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Old 06-12-2011, 11:23 PM
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well the gun isn't a few months old but the other stuff is
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Old 06-12-2011, 11:45 PM
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The coke bottle looks like it's full of fecal matter.
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Old 06-12-2011, 11:49 PM
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Should make a bigger coca-cola, I'm thirsty.
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Old 06-13-2011, 12:44 AM
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The coke bottle looks like it's full of fecal matter.
Ok
Now try some constructive criticism It's a bit more helpful
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Old 06-13-2011, 12:53 AM
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Tbh, I find the bottle GFX a little strange with their shadings, I believe it'd be nice if it actually had some form of background to back it up.
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Old 06-13-2011, 01:35 AM
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I love the look of the Coke bottle. If you look at Coca-Cola, it's more of a blackish color. Great job (:
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Old 06-13-2011, 02:23 AM
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I like you're work, but it could benefit from a few minor changes.

1) The cork in the first image appears jammed inside the container. It should be poking out of the top a little bit.

2) I agree that the color of the soda might be a little too light. It looks like a thicker liquid..like chocolate milk. Also, the cap on the bottle looks obnoxiously large.

3) The top/down view of the gun just doesn't look like a gun. It looks a little too short in length; at first glance they look like over-sized bullet.

You definitely have some good quality work here, nice job.
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I like you're work, but it could benefit from a few minor changes.

1) The cork in the first image appears jammed inside the container. It should be poking out of the top a little bit.

2) I agree that the color of the soda might be a little too light. It looks like a thicker liquid..like chocolate milk. Also, the cap on the bottle looks obnoxiously large.

3) The top/down view of the gun just doesn't look like a gun. It looks a little too short in length; at first glance they look like over-sized bullet.

You definitely have some good quality work here, nice job.
Thanks so much and as for the cap on the coke, yeah it looks large but plastic soda bottle caps are kinda large (right?)

The cork on the potion I already knew looked jammed lol I'll fix it and post it :3
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Old 06-14-2011, 12:56 AM
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Here's a grass tile I just made
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