Graal Forums  

Go Back   Graal Forums > Development Forums > Level Design
FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  #1  
Old 08-31-2006, 04:41 AM
excaliber7388 excaliber7388 is offline
Banned
excaliber7388's Avatar
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: US
Posts: 5,229
excaliber7388 can only hope to improve
Send a message via AIM to excaliber7388
Wip

Okay, I suck at cliffs.
Can someone guide me in the right direction?
Other thatn that, how's this level? I haven't done one in a while so I'm even more rusty than usual.
It looks better when you play, because the waves look better, and they move (scripted)
Also, here's a look at some of the stuff I've recently changed about DR's tileset
Remember, wip
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	newlev.png
Views:	192
Size:	87.8 KB
ID:	37630   Click image for larger version

Name:	newlev2.png
Views:	112
Size:	165.3 KB
ID:	37631   Click image for larger version

Name:	newlev3.png
Views:	127
Size:	168.5 KB
ID:	37632  
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 08-31-2006, 05:21 AM
Rapidwolve Rapidwolve is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 1,241
Rapidwolve is an unknown quantity at this point
Lol I couldnt do any better :]
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 08-31-2006, 05:41 AM
Sum41Freeeeek Sum41Freeeeek is offline
Future Coder
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 376
Sum41Freeeeek is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to Sum41Freeeeek
What's a wip?
Like, wipping up a level? lol

I think it looks cool.
__________________
Frankie Cassini: ex-Era LAT
Quote:
Originally Posted by brakk View Post
omg just go to your room and draw a pony then

**** the chicken wings!
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 08-31-2006, 10:57 AM
Shaun Shaun is offline
Registered User
Shaun's Avatar
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: Canada
Posts: 1,070
Shaun will become famous soon enough
I'm guessing Work in Progress.

The level is irrational (why are there stump bits there? And a stake? And a fence post?) and the edges look a bit sharp at areas.

There are also tile errors with the water.

Although it's a good start, as it is, I would not give this level a passing grade. It is not acceptable to go online, yet. Keep working on it.

Smoothen out the edges, make it a logical island, and try to add more variety with the island, with how the land touches the water.
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 08-31-2006, 02:19 PM
Magadal Magadal is offline
Banned
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Germany
Posts: 942
Magadal will become famous soon enough
Well...I dont really like it. Lots of tile errors in the water, and I dont like your cliffing. Wasnt there a cliffing tutorial somewhere on these forums?
Oh, and the tiles in the last two screenshots look totally ugly.
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 08-31-2006, 02:28 PM
Crono Crono is offline
:pluffy:
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Sweden
Posts: 20,000
Crono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond repute
Wow, tile errors all over water including tileset related errors. The cliff has tile errors, detail is too UN-like, and may I repeat the cliff has tile errors.

The best way to learn how to cliff is to get the pre-defined cliffs and try to join them together. Thats how Wan taught me. XD
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 08-31-2006, 04:57 PM
smirt362 smirt362 is offline
Tee Hee
smirt362's Avatar
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Texas
Posts: 2,101
smirt362 has a brilliant futuresmirt362 has a brilliant futuresmirt362 has a brilliant futuresmirt362 has a brilliant futuresmirt362 has a brilliant futuresmirt362 has a brilliant futuresmirt362 has a brilliant future
Send a message via AIM to smirt362 Send a message via MSN to smirt362
I think there are too many rocks in the water in addition to what they said above.
__________________

Don Hertzfeldt <3
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 08-31-2006, 05:51 PM
excaliber7388 excaliber7388 is offline
Banned
excaliber7388's Avatar
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: US
Posts: 5,229
excaliber7388 can only hope to improve
Send a message via AIM to excaliber7388
Yeah, wip means work in progress
And I'll look around for that tutorial
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 08-31-2006, 10:49 PM
excaliber7388 excaliber7388 is offline
Banned
excaliber7388's Avatar
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: US
Posts: 5,229
excaliber7388 can only hope to improve
Send a message via AIM to excaliber7388
Updates:
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	level123ru4.png
Views:	98
Size:	127.3 KB
ID:	37663  

Last edited by Darlene159; 09-01-2006 at 03:55 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 09-01-2006, 02:09 PM
Magadal Magadal is offline
Banned
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Germany
Posts: 942
Magadal will become famous soon enough
Still too much tile errors in water and cliffs, and too many stones in the water I think. But the details on the little island are better.
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 09-01-2006, 09:33 PM
excaliber7388 excaliber7388 is offline
Banned
excaliber7388's Avatar
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: US
Posts: 5,229
excaliber7388 can only hope to improve
Send a message via AIM to excaliber7388
Updates! (Tile errors should be gone, but tell me if you see any!)
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	alev.png
Views:	135
Size:	170.9 KB
ID:	37673  
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 09-01-2006, 09:59 PM
Crono Crono is offline
:pluffy:
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Sweden
Posts: 20,000
Crono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond repute
Big fat obvious ones...>_> ill post it later if you cant see it already
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 09-01-2006, 10:44 PM
Angel_Light Angel_Light is offline
Varia Developer
Angel_Light's Avatar
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Knoxville, TN
Posts: 1,684
Angel_Light is on a distinguished road
Send a message via AIM to Angel_Light Send a message via MSN to Angel_Light
I believe I'm fairly good at cliffs XD Gerami if you find anything strike me down! lol but here a gmap I made. Pay attention to the center Island not the ones on the outside (those are made by the level generator not me)
Attached Files
File Type: zip cliff.zip (9.5 KB, 92 views)
__________________
Deep into the Darkness peering...
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 09-02-2006, 02:33 PM
Huwajux Huwajux is offline
Zone Oracle
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: Padded cell
Posts: 3,947
Huwajux will become famous soon enough
Send a message via AIM to Huwajux Send a message via MSN to Huwajux
Most are tile errors. The rest just do not look very nice. There may be more.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	wip.png
Views:	106
Size:	227.2 KB
ID:	37676  
__________________
No matter where we go, or what we do, we will always live our lives within the confines of our own head.
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 09-02-2006, 05:51 PM
Crono Crono is offline
:pluffy:
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Sweden
Posts: 20,000
Crono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond repute
Alright watch and learn Huwajux. This is how you spot errors.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	yodude.png
Views:	110
Size:	288.1 KB
ID:	37677  
__________________
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +2. The time now is 08:30 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
Copyright (C) 1998-2019 Toonslab All Rights Reserved.