Graal Forums  

Go Back   Graal Forums > Development Forums > Level Design
FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
  #1  
Old 04-16-2009, 04:59 PM
King homer daStupid King homer daStupid is offline
Xelt
King homer daStupid's Avatar
Join Date: May 2005
Location: London, UK
Posts: 244
King homer daStupid is a jewel in the roughKing homer daStupid is a jewel in the rough
Another level :O

Hullo folks...I made another level.

Was wondering what you think?!
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	xelt_level2.png
Views:	174
Size:	178.1 KB
ID:	48143  
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 04-16-2009, 05:10 PM
Crono Crono is offline
:pluffy:
Join Date: Feb 2002
Location: Sweden
Posts: 20,000
Crono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond reputeCrono has a reputation beyond repute
Send a message via AIM to Crono
Much better than the last one. Technically speaking it's nice, but I have a few problems with the style.

-Water, your water is very "crab" like. Try making the water flow more smoothly or something. I don't like the water on the top left of the level, it makes the level look wrong.

-Deep sand, try making it flow better. It looks like little lumps randomly sticking around and it's not so nice. Also doesn't really make logical sense heh.

Love the detail on top of the cliff on the left. I like the technical aspect of the level, specially around the waterfall.

Keep going.
Attached Thumbnails
Click image for larger version

Name:	xelt_clifflol.png
Views:	90
Size:	20.8 KB
ID:	48144  
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 04-16-2009, 05:46 PM
DarkIceX DarkIceX is offline
(Developer)
Join Date: May 2002
Location: Canada
Posts: 125
DarkIceX is on a distinguished road
Above and to the right of the cave, one of the grass corner tiles is the wrong one. Also the waterfall looks iffy but those tiles are bad anyways in my opinion, so not really much you can do.

Otherwise very nice Xelt.
__________________

Bloodvayne
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 04-16-2009, 06:28 PM
WanDaMan WanDaMan is offline
Master Tux
WanDaMan's Avatar
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: England, United Kingdom
Posts: 5,571
WanDaMan is a jewel in the roughWanDaMan is a jewel in the rough
Send a message via MSN to WanDaMan
Absolutely brilliant. Lovin' the layout!! Keep it up!
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 04-17-2009, 11:44 PM
BARGAD BARGAD is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Sweden
Posts: 345
BARGAD will become famous soon enough
That looks like a great level !
__________________
Gori

Born To Kill
Death Silent Killers

Two little newbies, out in the sun.
Then came Gori and there was only one.

Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 04-18-2009, 12:34 AM
zephirot zephirot is offline
Banned?
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Paris
Posts: 1,311
zephirot is a name known to allzephirot is a name known to allzephirot is a name known to all
Send a message via AIM to zephirot Send a message via MSN to zephirot
Really nice.


hi xelt
__________________

Quote:
Originally Posted by unixmad
Can you just shut up ?
MAGA
MFGA
MEGA
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 04-18-2009, 05:46 PM
FriendlyLea FriendlyLea is offline
Lea!
FriendlyLea's Avatar
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: New York
Posts: 9
FriendlyLea is on a distinguished road
Its really pretty. [:
The only thing is that ending part on top of the left cliff (near the waterfall) kind of confuses me.
Other than that, its prettyyyy, Xelt!
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 04-18-2009, 08:36 PM
Matt Matt is offline
iZone Administrator
Matt's Avatar
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: United States
Posts: 2,690
Matt is a jewel in the roughMatt is a jewel in the rough
Besides the fact the right of the waterfall looks as if it's sitting on top of the cliffs, it looks good. I like it a lot.
__________________
Need Playerworld or Account support?
GraalOnline/Toonslab Support Center
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 05-06-2009, 07:13 PM
Vega001 Vega001 is offline
.
Join Date: Aug 2004
Posts: 92
Vega001 is on a distinguished road
I suggest adding more grass detail, specifically more tiles such as fences, rocks, etc.
I suggest adding more sand detail to a lesser extent than the grass detail.
I dislike your unorthodox use of the dark sand.
I suggest more experimenting with the waterfall to make it fit more nicely.
I suggest a different approach to edging out the medium (between shallow and deep) water beneath the waterfall.

Good use of layering and cliffing.
__________________
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +2. The time now is 09:03 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
Copyright (C) 1998-2019 Toonslab All Rights Reserved.