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Old 03-22-2009, 10:57 AM
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My house

This is my first thread in Level Designs, hope you like it.
These are some pics of my house.
Well
First one is from an older one, but the others are from the on I am working on.
Tell me what you think about them
OH, and I know I went a bit lazie :o
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The first one, and the very last one are decent.

In the first one, where your character is standing on the carpet i guess? I dislike the overlapping that's going on there. In the very last one, the building looks too crazy, for me at least. What's with the transparent tree stump on the roof? The fence on the top has random tree bush tiles within it? The rest of the ones i didn't mention i think are ugly. I'm guessing you you just got lazy, or your trying to get 'back into' levels designing?
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Old 03-24-2009, 04:47 PM
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In the very last one, the building looks too crazy, for me at least. What's with the transparent tree stump on the roof?
The fence on the top has random tree bush tiles within it?
Well.
Thats a house on a server, and its made like "city style"
The owner told me, I should make al houses with some green.


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The rest of the ones i didn't mention i think are ugly. I'm guessing you you just got lazy, or your trying to get 'back into' levels designing?
One of my friends said same.
Well, I currently also learn scripting, but I should work for a server of another friend(I told him long time ago I will, if hes got one).
So I try to make some levels also.
I think I posted ALL levels I got, so you see the full house(what was a mistake, I saw)
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Old 03-25-2009, 10:32 AM
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The second one could use a statue or two.
Third one could have chairs and tables.
Other then that the rest are nice
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Old 03-25-2009, 02:10 PM
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The second one could use a statue or two.
Erm...
look in the middle.
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Old 03-25-2009, 09:07 PM
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I think the first level looks best, the rest looks.... Square. 3 and 4 are uninteresting, maybe make it smaller, and less square?
The lot of the rooms have unused space, try to play around with walls to make the rooms smaller. Smaller rooms almost always look better than larger rooms.
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Old 03-26-2009, 11:36 PM
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The first level is the best out of the ones you provided. Your last level, the outside, isn't horrible but a few of the things are a little square and a tad unnatural-looking. The blue rooms with a winter theme don't catch my eye at all, but I've never been fond of the blue or winter tiles.

There isn't much detail in your floor and the rooms are looking a little square, but overall not bad. Like Pimmeh said, you don't want your rooms to look spacious.
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