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Old 02-04-2006, 11:44 PM
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Another Outside Level

I was going for playability. Rate it please.

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Old 02-04-2006, 11:58 PM
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Looks great but remove the tree house and try to make a custom house
and the chest as well
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Old 02-05-2006, 10:55 AM
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Very nice. Especially the cliff structure.
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Old 02-05-2006, 05:58 PM
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Looks great but remove the tree house and try to make a custom house
and the chest as well
.. the level is fine in my opinion and the treehouse doesn't need any changing ! Go team predef tiles

The only thing I would change would be the detailing, but thats personal :P
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Old 02-05-2006, 07:17 PM
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I like it. 8/10
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Old 02-05-2006, 07:29 PM
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It's good, could use a little more grass detail. i like the cliffs
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Old 02-05-2006, 08:23 PM
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I like it, the simplistically detailed grass turns me on. 7.5/10
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Old 02-05-2006, 09:49 PM
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I think it's overdetailed, and the layout looks a bit random.
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Old 02-05-2006, 10:02 PM
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I like out, all though there are too much 'useful' items in the level (chest, stones, sword statue). 7.5/10
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Old 02-06-2006, 04:30 AM
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I like your cliffs, and your waterfall thingy. Other than that, though, I'm not too crazy for it.

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Old 02-06-2006, 05:11 PM
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all though there are too much 'useful' items in the level (chest, stones, sword statue).
Do tell how that is a negative feature.
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Do tell how that is a negative feature.
It's like he's just putting stuff there for the hell of putting stuff there... It takes away from the purpose of them...

Like, what's with that statue on the edge of the cliff where nobody can read the sign?

Why are there two grey rocks between those cliff ends when it's obvious that there are well beaten paths on both sides?

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Old 02-06-2006, 08:17 PM
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could use a little more grass detail.
Wtf?

Anyway, yeah, reduce the grass detail.
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Old 02-06-2006, 09:04 PM
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It's like he's just putting stuff there for the hell of putting stuff there... It takes away from the purpose of them...

Like, what's with that statue on the edge of the cliff where nobody can read the sign?

Why are there two grey rocks between those cliff ends when it's obvious that there are well beaten paths on both sides?
It adds a little more interactivety to the levels, no matter how little interactivety it is. It would be better than just walking through several levels continuously. I agree that it would get tedious if there were too many obstacles in the way, though.
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Old 02-06-2006, 10:06 PM
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It's like he's just putting stuff there for the hell of putting stuff there... It takes away from the purpose of them...

Like, what's with that statue on the edge of the cliff where nobody can read the sign?

Why are there two grey rocks between those cliff ends when it's obvious that there are well beaten paths on both sides?

Too many eggs in one basket.
I have to agree, that's what I thought too.
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