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Old 12-09-2010, 03:45 AM
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Okay so I haven't made a level in awhile and I (tried) using the LttP tileset because it looked neat, what do you think?

Things to note:
  • I made some minor edits in paint, I suppose that's cheating but I'm a bit of a perfectionist.
  • I personally don't like the coastal cliffs, but I wanted to get all of the dock in the level so that's what I ended up with.
  • I don't even know why I added that dock, it's abit plain -- I suppose I wanted to make the village aspect more realistic.
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n
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Old 12-09-2010, 03:49 AM
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Old 12-09-2010, 03:55 AM
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It looks really nice!

It was hard for me to find anything that should be changed, but if anything I would recommend centering the bird statue by moving it up a little bit.
I have never used this tileset so I'm not sure if you can do this but, the railings on the stairs from the dock level to the upper level, could they have a better top?
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Old 12-09-2010, 05:45 AM
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Old 12-09-2010, 11:24 AM
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Old 12-09-2010, 11:28 AM
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Nice island. I agree about the bird being slight off place. I smell a good tile and(and perhaps a third of a tile) off.
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good work. some minor errors here and there but good tiling + style.
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  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n
Those fish look like they came from Eskimo Bob.
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Nice job. When professionally done, a level can use a few errors here and there if the leveler is conscious of the alteration and wishes it to be that way. That's my opinion.

I don't see any unexcused errors. The only thing I don't like is the "8" rock and its placement.
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Nice job. When professionally done, a level can use a few errors here and there if the leveler is conscious of the alteration and wishes it to be that way. That's my opinion.

I don't see any unexcused errors. The only thing I don't like is the "8" rock and its placement.
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Okay so I haven't made a level in awhile and I (tried) using the LttP tileset because it looked neat, what do you think?

Things to note:
  • I made some minor edits in paint, I suppose that's cheating but I'm a bit of a perfectionist.
  • I personally don't like the coastal cliffs, but I wanted to get all of the dock in the level so that's what I ended up with.
  • I don't even know why I added that dock, it's abit plain -- I suppose I wanted to make the village aspect more realistic.
  • Credit goes to UN for the fish images, and of course Nintendo for the tileset n_n
I think you should fix that bartender right at the bottom. It doesn't look right at the spot
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