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Old 04-23-2007, 09:01 AM
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Marine Pixeled

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head looks flat I think..
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Old 04-23-2007, 10:47 AM
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more contrast =o
the pic is too dark
i guess you wanted to give it a ...dark feeling...like in war or so :S still ! maybe use red light effects and fire in the background
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Old 04-23-2007, 12:44 PM
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not much of a camouflage feeling in the camo.
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Old 04-23-2007, 01:04 PM
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also..did you want to make the marines props right? if so, i can help you
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Old 04-23-2007, 09:23 PM
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changed the camo..
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Old 04-23-2007, 10:28 PM
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I really dislike the head shape :s
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Old 04-23-2007, 10:47 PM
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Redid head..
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Marines shouldn't have long hair, and why is he half naked?
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Old 04-23-2007, 11:01 PM
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Considering its pixel art, I give it a 8/10
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Old 04-24-2007, 01:45 AM
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It's just working concept graphics for a game.. He will probably hire someone to make proper ones once the coding is further along.
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Old 04-24-2007, 02:11 AM
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I like the middle one
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Aha thats cool
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thats a nice marine!
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Old 04-24-2007, 03:23 PM
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It made me laugh a little.

I like the cartoonish looking style you drew him in. Though, the neck and the head need to be moved more to the right...Right now he's at a 3/4's view, but it looks like his head were to be sitting on someones body faceing you...Kinda hard for me to explain, you should see the problem now, since it has been pointed out.

Also you should show where the chest ends. He's supposed to be pretty cut, but there's no mussle indentation by the right arm. You might also want to fix the left leg...It looks as though he were walking sideways at someone, or something. Might just be the way its supposed to look though. Its hard to tell.

But I like the design.
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It made me laugh a little.

I like the cartoonish looking style you drew him in. Though, the neck and the head need to be moved more to the right...Right now he's at a 3/4's view, but it looks like his head were to be sitting on someones body faceing you...Kinda hard for me to explain, you should see the problem now, since it has been pointed out.

Also you should show where the chest ends. He's supposed to be pretty cut, but there's no mussle indentation by the right arm. You might also want to fix the left leg...It looks as though he were walking sideways at someone, or something. Might just be the way its supposed to look though. Its hard to tell.

But I like the design.
Thanks, very useful comments.
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