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Old 11-13-2007, 04:52 PM
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Rate my level.

Originally made for Aimee (was her birthday, she wanted a hangout level for UN...), I decided I'd just put my time into it and try to make something good to post here (like I do every year).

Halfway through I kind of forgot it was supposed to be a hangout level, explaining the stump and 2 chairs. Some of you might remember I made a waterfall level last year kind of like this...I wasn't happy with it. But this one seems fine.

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edit- Rufus didn't like the original, so I edited it based on what he thought was wrong.
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Old 11-13-2007, 05:15 PM
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Like it.. the best part of it is that it looks realistic in the right amounts!
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Old 11-13-2007, 05:55 PM
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The waterfall on the top cliff that falls down alone looks fine, most likely because the cliffs next to it bend down, and not up like the other one, but the other one looks strange.
Same with the other 2 (the lower ones), I like the smaller and the single waterfall, but the other one looks strange.
Nevertheless, nice work
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Old 11-13-2007, 06:23 PM
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Amazing! Lovely job!! 9/10
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Old 11-14-2007, 01:09 AM
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There, added an edit to the original post.
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Old 11-14-2007, 01:37 AM
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I like the second one.
Very nice.
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Old 11-14-2007, 10:56 AM
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Old 11-14-2007, 12:23 PM
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I like the second one better
But not the waterfalls!
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Old 11-14-2007, 05:24 PM
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Amazing! Lovely job!! 9/10
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Old 11-14-2007, 07:24 PM
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I see some errors that could easily be fixed, but overall, good job.
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I see some errors that could easily be fixed, but overall, good job.
Point them out please.
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Old 11-14-2007, 09:37 PM
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Wow, that a godly level dude Love it
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Old 11-14-2007, 09:53 PM
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ok crono, 9.5/10. and dude, DRAW A PLUFFY MATRIX OR PLUFFY ZONEIAN!!!
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Old 11-15-2007, 02:13 AM
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0/10, make a creative level, not a tree/cliff/water level... zzZZ
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Old 11-15-2007, 02:17 AM
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Way to busy on the ground, in all honesty I agree with thehawker a little that it is kinda boring, but in general there are way to many tiles on the ground, looks like you just randomly put them everywhere.
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