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Old 12-31-2007, 03:24 AM
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Old 12-31-2007, 03:28 AM
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Never was a big fan of how Zenkou's tall grass tiles looked when stacked, but try making that one square of grass -> sand a little more organic. Looks good to me, but isn't the grass detailing on Zenkou a little more full? :o
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Old 12-31-2007, 01:24 PM
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Yea, the detailing isn't finished yet IMHO
But I think that this can be a really nice level. I like the Zenkou tileset anyway ^_^
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Old 12-31-2007, 01:47 PM
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Nice level. Although i would move the sign somewere else. :P
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Old 01-01-2008, 01:35 AM
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The sign definitely belongs in another spot and there is a few tile errors that I didn’t get a chance to fix but yeah thanks allot for all your advises looking forward to having an awesome new year!
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Old 01-01-2008, 01:52 AM
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8/10 its very nice, but the house is somewhat confusing...
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Old 01-01-2008, 03:48 PM
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8/10 its very nice, but the house is somewhat confusing...
I agree, the perspective you gave the house is different from the 'bridge/platform' to the left of it
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Old 01-03-2008, 01:30 PM
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To be honest, it kinda sucks. With the zenkou tiles you should be able to make a much better level. Also try using perspective or atleast realistic roofs, notting personal but I hate it when people go oh lets make a weird ass roof that so shows how great my skill is (well it can.. if atleast the perspective is right >.> but thats almost never the case)

Improve the perspective
Use some more tiles and improve detail and it will look very nice.

You're edges water/land and grass/sand might also be more creative. Try just pulling out some parts and making them swirly or a bit more complicated, this will distract people from the fact that other lines might be quite straight.
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Old 01-07-2008, 02:15 PM
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