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Old 09-08-2006, 07:47 PM
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Story book creation

I've started college and i am taking english language as a subject.

I'm going to do as a part of my coursework a full story.
it is unknown what i will call it for a title just yet,
soon i will choose one.

I've decided to base it on my character, Chris Steele.
And the world of graal, of course change and tweek little things to make it more realistic.

Also based on events that have happened in the past including many players.

Also i need to do this for my coursework, so when it is done I'll post it and you guys can copy and paste it if you want it.

It reveals the history of Crescent Pirates, Why the bomies came to earth, Who the REAL Chris Steele is.
And why everything is the way it is set as it is today.

I'm going to get started on it soon and it will take a while.

But hopefully not too long.
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Old 09-08-2006, 07:54 PM
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I've started college and i am taking english language as a subject.
I very much doubt that, since you've said 'subject' instead of Major. Also, you breaky your paragraphs in all the wrong places and double-space them.
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It reveals the history of Crescent Pirates, Why the bomies came to earth, Who the REAL Chris Steele is.
And why everything is the way it is set as it is today.
Earth? Haha, okay. The storyline of why bomies are still present is on the official page for Kingdoms. That would not need to be revealed. Same goes for why everyone is on the Archipelago.
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Old 09-08-2006, 09:40 PM
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bleh bleh just you wait and see hehe, also by the way i say subject instead of major because we don't say major in Britain, at least not where i come from, i don't really care if you believe i go to college or not, why would i lie about something as pointless as that?

plus the graalian story is incomplete, and i think sufficient time has passed to move the story up a little.
As you see, the storyline is incomplete, i want it to be completed.

The actual game of graal seems as if it has been completed as the wilderness is safe and bomys barely hurt you at all, So i will try continue the story, whats wrong with that?
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Old 09-08-2006, 10:45 PM
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Firstly Chris does go to college and it is called 'Subject' or 'Course' over here..
and Secondly, I better be in this story.
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Old 09-09-2006, 07:38 PM
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haha

Yeah you are,
A lot of people are,
Those i know well are.

Even Yannick and Maroku are,
They don't know it yet,
haha.

flamecat is also in it.

Ricky quit however so he is not.

Bosh is also in the story,
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Old 09-09-2006, 09:19 PM
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And Im sure Alan and Alisa will be in it aswell...hmm.. what about Kerith? he could fit in the story nicely

((btw.. the girl bit in your signature is quite funny))
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Old 09-10-2006, 12:25 AM
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Chapter 1 Complete

i started the book Today.

Chapter 1 is now complete.

I'll tell you a little about it.

I've based it on the origonal story but changed it a little.
And i've decided to call Main island Mayne Island because well.. cause i can?

haha anyways the book title is called Kingdom of Graal
Th lost chapter
basically 200 years have passed since the bomys have arrived and decide to strike yet again after biding time,

Will the humans survive?
Can the 5 hostile kingdoms agree to work together and help mayne island?
or will they kill each other in the process?

(i'm also adding a new villian in the plot deadlier than the bomys, which is a carry on form my old Rp event i done.)
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Old 09-10-2006, 05:54 AM
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Old 09-10-2006, 06:09 AM
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Old 09-10-2006, 07:58 AM
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