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Old 07-19-2006, 02:10 PM
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Town level, 2nd attempt

This is my 2nd attempt at a level for a town in my playerworld. Comments and criticism are welcome.

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Old 07-19-2006, 06:22 PM
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I can't really say I'm overly fond of the bottom-right house. The detail could also use a bit of work.
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Old 07-20-2006, 08:52 AM
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Nice cliff work. Like the top right house. Detail is still ugly, level is too plain. The colors used are nothing exciting. :[
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Old 07-21-2006, 03:37 AM
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Detailing. Also, I am not too fond of the surrounding tiles on the stone trail, but that's probably just me.
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Old 07-21-2006, 06:44 AM
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The only thing I like is the cliff. I don't like the detailing, and I don't like those 2 types of tiles you used for your path togethor.
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Old 07-22-2006, 09:44 AM
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Nice, I never saw the first attempt. But it's a quite cute little town, are you experimenting with the path? Because you usually don't put those brown/orange ones on the outside. They're more like inside tiles.
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Old 07-31-2006, 06:36 PM
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I dont like that path, the level would be quite good, but fix up the two houses, remove the house inside bar, maybe make a encloused counter thing and add the bottles from that,
Also add some detail ;o
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