Well i think the reviews should be alot longer, Angel did a 4 page one in HTML, she should have let some of that into her review.
I think what you need to do as well as reviewing it, is tell us stats such as:
Quests: X
Outside Lvls: X
Also on the review maybe something like this, where you pick 4-5 examples and you break it down them summarise it.
EXAMPLE NPCS
NPC One - Hat System
Well guys this is great, not only have they not used ANY of the original hat images, they have made a new viewing method which works very well and gives even more excitment to collecting hats with their new features.
NPC Two - Train
Okay like alot of PWs online they have the usual stuff which seems to be on every PW
. But one thing almost all don't have is a working train, from what I can see this looks bug free and wont lag the players at all, nice one.
NPC Three - Farming Job
This is also great, they have made a job where you don't need key bashing, is fun, and gives you a worth while pay. I won't spoil it, wait until its online
NPC Four - GUI
Not so good here im affraid, the GUI didn't work and so it spoilt it as I couldn't see what weapon I had selected nor could I see my stats which are vital to be visable. I hope you can get this fixed before you open and maybe something to switch back to normal graal GUI.
NPCs Overall
Well as you can see from them four the quality of scripting is high, although I don't quite know what happened with the GUI, as its not as complicated as a train, anyroad, good good guys, I hope to see alot of nice script updated to your PW.
Score: 8.5/10
--See that ^ !? Not only has it given us a more detailed break down, the reviews are longer, as after all some can make it for 2 years with hundreds of levels,scripts,gfx and manhours put into the project and only get about 600-800words said about it.
Also by explaning it more, it will give us a more detailed look at what the PW may be like. And this way we can be more excited for the NPCs/Levels that got a high score.
Also the players would have to stop asking about the review for about a week so the PWA can do a nice long review.