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Old 11-13-2009, 03:58 AM
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Arrow HOH! new level :O

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Got bored and made this don't really like it that much and my editor got stuck with the old tileset from back in the day so the grass is a bit screwed !

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Old 11-13-2009, 04:07 AM
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:07 AM
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Dude it looks awesome to me, I would so hire you if I were high staff or an owner of a server.

I'm sure there will be those with more detailed info on what is wrong with it maybe >.>
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:18 AM
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7/10, as requested.
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:20 AM
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It looks VERY amazing. I cant even tell you what to improve to it xP
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:34 AM
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Old 11-13-2009, 04:44 AM
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If you're practicing cliffs the cliffing is ok but I think there's too many layers facing the same direction. It does get a bit repetitive.

Your dirt styling is ok but try to detail it some, it seems you used one dirt tile for almost all of it. Water, it's shape, and stuff look ok.

The entire level is under-detailed. It doesn't fit the detailed nature of the water and dirt outline nor does it fit the cliffs very well.

Overall it's an ok show level.
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Old 11-13-2009, 05:10 AM
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I could've sworn I've seen that o.o

But anyway, it's very nice. Good job.
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Old 11-13-2009, 09:44 AM
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nice level mate, but as Crono mentioned earlier it looks a bit repetitive. More detail and I'd say switch up the cliffs a bit but all in all you did a decent job.

Keep up the great leveling!
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Old 11-13-2009, 02:40 PM
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I could've sworn I've seen that o.o

But anyway, it's very nice. Good job.
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Old 11-13-2009, 06:17 PM
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You should use a bit of NPCs, it doesn't hurt (for exemple a treetop that would go over that house)

Other than that, it looks great to my eyes, I like the feel from it
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Old 11-13-2009, 07:05 PM
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You should use a bit of NPCs, it doesn't hurt (for exemple a treetop that would go over that house)
No need to do that.
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Old 11-13-2009, 11:10 PM
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No need to do that.
It's not especialy needed yeah, but a house with tiles over a tree is quite weird. I mean in that case, just look at it.
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Old 11-14-2009, 03:37 AM
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Old 11-14-2009, 05:02 AM
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My only complaint is the overabundance of north facing cliffs (mostly because they're completely uniform, straight, with no change of direction, just no variation). I think the grass detailing is fine, though there are a few other grass tiles in that tileset that can be used. Don't like how the house sits ontop of the tree (especially on the left side). It gives the appearance that the house is built ontop of the tree, but it clearly isn't.
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