Graal Forums  

Go Back   Graal Forums > Gold Servers > Zone > Gfx submissions
FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread Display Modes
  #1  
Old 05-10-2008, 07:07 PM
Frazzle Frazzle is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: England
Posts: 137
Frazzle is on a distinguished road
Completed Head.

Just finished a head. Any advice in which i can make it better?
Attached Images
 
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 05-10-2008, 07:15 PM
xAzerothx xAzerothx is offline
Banned
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Gurnee, Illinois
Posts: 2,615
xAzerothx has a little shameless behaviour in the past
Send a message via AIM to xAzerothx Send a message via MSN to xAzerothx Send a message via Yahoo to xAzerothx
It looks like something a person from the future would wear in a crappy movie.
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 05-10-2008, 07:16 PM
Frazzle Frazzle is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: England
Posts: 137
Frazzle is on a distinguished road
Quote:
Originally Posted by xAzerothx View Post
It looks like something a person from the future would wear in a crappy movie.
Zone is kinda Futuristic.
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 05-10-2008, 07:23 PM
pooper200000 pooper200000 is offline
The Blackswan
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Asylum
Posts: 5,060
pooper200000 will become famous soon enough
Send a message via AIM to pooper200000
Reminds me of that Avatar person.
__________________
Always Watching!
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 05-10-2008, 07:24 PM
Frazzle Frazzle is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: England
Posts: 137
Frazzle is on a distinguished road
Quote:
Originally Posted by pooper200000 View Post
Reminds me of that Avatar person.
Come to think of it, It does .
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 05-10-2008, 07:29 PM
cbk1994 cbk1994 is offline
the fake one
cbk1994's Avatar
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 10,718
cbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond repute
Send a message via AIM to cbk1994
Work on the shading of the hair or whatever the gray is ... looks like you just used a gradient. Also maybe add a texture?
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 05-10-2008, 07:32 PM
Frazzle Frazzle is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: England
Posts: 137
Frazzle is on a distinguished road
Quote:
Originally Posted by cbkbud View Post
Work on the shading of the hair or whatever the gray is ... looks like you just used a gradient. Also maybe add a texture?
Alright then, When i find time i will.

Edit: Altered the back of the head.
Attached Images
 

Last edited by Frazzle; 05-10-2008 at 07:47 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 05-10-2008, 08:09 PM
Tigairius Tigairius is offline
The Cat
Tigairius's Avatar
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Missouri, USA
Posts: 4,240
Tigairius has a brilliant futureTigairius has a brilliant futureTigairius has a brilliant futureTigairius has a brilliant futureTigairius has a brilliant futureTigairius has a brilliant futureTigairius has a brilliant futureTigairius has a brilliant future
I like the first one better.
__________________


“Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars.”
Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 05-10-2008, 08:12 PM
cbk1994 cbk1994 is offline
the fake one
cbk1994's Avatar
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 10,718
cbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond repute
Send a message via AIM to cbk1994
It still needs texture.
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 05-10-2008, 08:13 PM
Dan Dan is offline
Daniel
Join Date: Oct 2007
Posts: 383
Dan is an unknown quantity at this point
Send a message via MSN to Dan
Nice The more heads, the better it is
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 05-10-2008, 08:14 PM
Frazzle Frazzle is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: England
Posts: 137
Frazzle is on a distinguished road
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tigairius View Post
I like the first one better.
I'm not really sure, The back of the head on the first Image looks a bit wrong.

Edit: Don't have much experience GFxing, How would i add texture to it, Chris?
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 05-10-2008, 08:43 PM
cbk1994 cbk1994 is offline
the fake one
cbk1994's Avatar
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 10,718
cbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond repute
Send a message via AIM to cbk1994
Quote:
Originally Posted by Frazzle View Post
Don't have much experience GFxing, How would i add texture to it, Chris?
I don't either

But right now it looks like you just added a gradient, even if by hand. Would a persons head really be that smooth? Perhaps try making it not a perfect gradient.




The same concept can be applied to what you are doing. Just make it look not so flat and like it is rough, etc

EDIT: Yes, I know those images look horrible
__________________

Last edited by cbk1994; 05-10-2008 at 09:54 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 05-10-2008, 08:47 PM
Frazzle Frazzle is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: England
Posts: 137
Frazzle is on a distinguished road
The metallic parts are supposed to be metal

Last edited by Frazzle; 05-10-2008 at 09:14 PM..
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 05-10-2008, 09:30 PM
cbk1994 cbk1994 is offline
the fake one
cbk1994's Avatar
Join Date: Mar 2003
Location: San Francisco
Posts: 10,718
cbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond reputecbk1994 has a reputation beyond repute
Send a message via AIM to cbk1994
Quote:
Originally Posted by Frazzle View Post
The metallic parts are supposed to be metal
In that case it looks far too much like hair, and not at all like metal.

Good job so far though
__________________
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 05-10-2008, 09:46 PM
Frazzle Frazzle is offline
Registered User
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: England
Posts: 137
Frazzle is on a distinguished road
Quote:
Originally Posted by cbkbud View Post
In that case it looks far too much like hair, and not at all like metal.

Good job so far though
Ty
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT +2. The time now is 03:59 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2022, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
Copyright (C) 1998-2019 Toonslab All Rights Reserved.