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Old 08-01-2009, 06:32 PM
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Talking My Jetpack.

Hey guys, I uhh made a Jetpack. Tell me what you think. Keep in mind im not the best graphic artist. Just trying to get involved in the forums.

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Old 08-01-2009, 08:05 PM
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Old 08-01-2009, 09:55 PM
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There really isn't any detail, but I can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but I just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is OK but it looks weird. Now There are way to many colors you used sorry if I added some though.


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Old 08-01-2009, 10:23 PM
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Old 08-01-2009, 10:33 PM
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Your welcome, even my version sucks. I am sure of it that there are other versions in the Graal Folder that you might be able to look at like Aeons for example, it might help you see what you can do better.
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Old 08-02-2009, 12:40 AM
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There really isn't any detail, but I can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but I just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is OK but it looks weird. Now There are way to many colors you used sorry if I added some though.


Just an Example.


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That is in no way better.

Ok, first of all the shape is awkward, not sure how it's a jetpack. Shading is fine and dandy but you also have to realise that you need to portray depth in your thing, not just a lightsource.
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Old 08-02-2009, 01:20 AM
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there really isn't any detail, but i can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but i just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is ok but it looks weird. Now there are way to many colors you used sorry if i added some though.


Just an example.


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that is in no way better.

Ok, first of all the shape is awkward, not sure how it's a jetpack. Shading is fine and dandy but you also have to realise that you need to portray depth in your thing, not just a lightsource.
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Old 08-19-2009, 09:50 AM
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